12-21-2008, 08:32 PM
Well, sry to say but they look bad.
You should improve these things:
1.
- Hair look like an explosion
- black pixels
- much from firen
- whats the orange thing on his t-shirt?
- nearly no shading
2.
- not 100% from scratch, I can see parts of Jack, Henry and Davis
- T-shirt looks wierd
- All in one he looks a bit small
- too simple shading
3.
- no shading
- looks like he is dancing xD
- T-shirt too big / pants too small
- his head is in an false perspective
- colors look a bit wierd
You should improve these things:
1.
- Hair look like an explosion
- black pixels
- much from firen
- whats the orange thing on his t-shirt?
- nearly no shading
2.
- not 100% from scratch, I can see parts of Jack, Henry and Davis
- T-shirt looks wierd
- All in one he looks a bit small
- too simple shading
3.
- no shading
- looks like he is dancing xD
- T-shirt too big / pants too small
- his head is in an false perspective
- colors look a bit wierd

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