12-22-2008, 05:46 AM
You've got talent only a newcomer like u can have what it takes to show his sprite drawings that aren't well masterd. Here are what u need:
1st pic:
- No shading ( same with dome ).
- Hair is funky. Does he have an afro?
- Wierd pixels and poor colouring.
2nd pic:
- Same again, no shadings.
- Fix jacket shading, brightness, texture and design.
3rd pic:
- Legs are in a poor pose and in wierd direction.
- Poor colouring.
- Funky pose ( same with dome ).
- Completley flat with no human like shape of body.
- Too much shirt and too little pants ( same with dome again! ).
Hard and sorry to say dude but u gotta fix alot of stuff. Keep trying. U have talent. With a little practice your hard work will come out.
1st pic:
- No shading ( same with dome ).
- Hair is funky. Does he have an afro?
- Wierd pixels and poor colouring.
2nd pic:
- Same again, no shadings.
- Fix jacket shading, brightness, texture and design.
3rd pic:
- Legs are in a poor pose and in wierd direction.
- Poor colouring.
- Funky pose ( same with dome ).
- Completley flat with no human like shape of body.
- Too much shirt and too little pants ( same with dome again! ).
Hard and sorry to say dude but u gotta fix alot of stuff. Keep trying. U have talent. With a little practice your hard work will come out.

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