04-14-2009, 09:21 PM
at first: WELCOME IN LFE.gif)
4 ur 1. sprite it looks very good i think. well... there r much things ull have to work on but like i siad: its ur 1. sprite, and 4 that it looks good
but ill tell u now what i think u have to improve:
u have to make a structure in his hair, it looks a bit wierd when there is just some shading at some accidentally places. make some strands or something like this in his hair
then blur the lines on his shirt a bit so that it fuses a bit with this green of his shirt.
and dont make the lines on his pants straightly like this. when u r wearing a pants with lines, they wont be straightly 2, because of many folds
and blur the lines a little bit 2
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4 ur 1. sprite it looks very good i think. well... there r much things ull have to work on but like i siad: its ur 1. sprite, and 4 that it looks good

but ill tell u now what i think u have to improve:
u have to make a structure in his hair, it looks a bit wierd when there is just some shading at some accidentally places. make some strands or something like this in his hair

then blur the lines on his shirt a bit so that it fuses a bit with this green of his shirt.
and dont make the lines on his pants straightly like this. when u r wearing a pants with lines, they wont be straightly 2, because of many folds

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