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[Char] My first spriting: Lynx
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at first: WELCOME IN LFE;)

4 ur 1. sprite it looks very good i think. well... there r much things ull have to work on but like i siad: its ur 1. sprite, and 4 that it looks good :)
but ill tell u now what i think u have to improve:

u have to make a structure in his hair, it looks a bit wierd when there is just some shading at some accidentally places. make some strands or something like this in his hair:)
then blur the lines on his shirt a bit so that it fuses a bit with this green of his shirt.
and dont make the lines on his pants straightly like this. when u r wearing a pants with lines, they wont be straightly 2, because of many folds :) and blur the lines a little bit 2 ;)
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[Char] My first spriting: Lynx - by Pirate - 04-14-2009, 06:46 PM
RE: [Char] My first spriting: Lynx - by Ascor - 04-14-2009, 06:54 PM
RE: [Char] My first spriting: Lynx - by Lauli - 04-14-2009, 07:46 PM
RE: [Char] My first spriting: Lynx - by Pirate - 04-14-2009, 08:32 PM
RE: [Char] My first spriting: Lynx - by Cerberus - 04-14-2009, 09:21 PM
RE: [Char] My first spriting: Lynx - by chase123 - 04-15-2009, 04:50 AM



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