05-05-2009, 06:31 PM
erm... is this some criminal whose eyes have to be covered? :P
anyways, quite good for your first attempt to sprite a girl, Reaper. There are some things to fix, though:
- her waist is a little comparably thin to the rest of the body
- her left arm is a little thicker than her right one
- the shoulders look quite boy-ish, they should be a little thinner
- there's no hair at her neck
- there are no highlights on the clothes
That's all I see at the moment. Just practice a little, you'll get better soon
Spoiler (Click to View)
- her waist is a little comparably thin to the rest of the body
- her left arm is a little thicker than her right one
- the shoulders look quite boy-ish, they should be a little thinner
- there's no hair at her neck
- there are no highlights on the clothes
That's all I see at the moment. Just practice a little, you'll get better soon
.gif)
Silverthorn / Blue Phoenix
~ Breaking LFE since 2008 ~
"Freeze, you're under vrest!" - Mark, probably.
» Gallery | » Sprites | » DeviantArt
~ Breaking LFE since 2008 ~
"Freeze, you're under vrest!" - Mark, probably.
» Gallery | » Sprites | » DeviantArt