05-31-2009, 10:01 AM
FINALLY!
I see you took Bandit as a base, didn't you? Well, I actually welcome it that you used him this time. It moves your sprite to a whole new level. As skel mentioned, the six-pack got a little.... 4-square-ish :P
Also, you may let some hair come down on his forehead, it gives a little more realistic look that a sharp & straight hairline. A bit hair is missing on the top-right side, imo. Would look a little better if you add some. Pretty much, take Davis's hair as a reference on how the outline of hair has to look like
I see you took Bandit as a base, didn't you? Well, I actually welcome it that you used him this time. It moves your sprite to a whole new level. As skel mentioned, the six-pack got a little.... 4-square-ish :P
Also, you may let some hair come down on his forehead, it gives a little more realistic look that a sharp & straight hairline. A bit hair is missing on the top-right side, imo. Would look a little better if you add some. Pretty much, take Davis's hair as a reference on how the outline of hair has to look like
Silverthorn / Blue Phoenix
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