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The World Ends With You [the story]
#4
Make sure to say who the person is talking to
and fix grammer too if possible
overall i sorta like it. but i still don't get it. It's like all of a sudden it's to the climax or rising action or something, idk my opinion...
A sequence of variables thatre engraved since the beginning of the cosmos is responsible for animating things in reality
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The World Ends With You [the story] - by Elias - 06-07-2009, 02:35 AM
RE: The World Ends With You [the story] - by LutiChris - 06-08-2009, 04:14 PM



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