06-08-2009, 04:14 PM
Make sure to say who the person is talking to
and fix grammer too if possible
overall i sorta like it. but i still don't get it. It's like all of a sudden it's to the climax or rising action or something, idk my opinion...
and fix grammer too if possible
overall i sorta like it. but i still don't get it. It's like all of a sudden it's to the climax or rising action or something, idk my opinion...
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