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The World Ends With You [the story]
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(06-08-2009, 04:14 PM)LutiChris Wrote:  Make sure to say who the person is talking to
and fix grammer too if possible
overall i sorta like it. but i still don't get it. It's like all of a sudden it's to the climax or rising action or something, idk my opinion...

Yeah, the story is confusing in begging, because I try to write it kinda of out of the game and it's confusing too.
I am back, not really.
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The World Ends With You [the story] - by Elias - 06-07-2009, 02:35 AM
RE: The World Ends With You [the story] - by Elias - 06-10-2009, 08:05 PM



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