06-10-2009, 08:05 PM
(06-08-2009, 04:14 PM)LutiChris Wrote: Make sure to say who the person is talking to
and fix grammer too if possible
overall i sorta like it. but i still don't get it. It's like all of a sudden it's to the climax or rising action or something, idk my opinion...
Yeah, the story is confusing in begging, because I try to write it kinda of out of the game and it's confusing too.
I am back, not really.