Little Fighter : At world's end

[Ascor]

See...
First of all please call me Hacker or Alec.
Kenzo is just the name of my rep character
Let's go to the story.
In the first moment you are throwed into cold water.
Sometimes this effect is really cool but your story is something like:
"C'mon here we go. Just think of what's for example Air-Ball. I won't explain it to you but it doesnt matters. Let's just jump to another character."
What i wanted to say (don't think i'm mean i just give honest critic), you should explain the little things more.
That makes a story better.
It's like:

First version (really bad):
They fighted each other.
His sword hittet the enemy.
Then he stabbed him.
Second version (may good)
Then they fighted each other because XYZ couldn't take it anymore (or insert some other reason here).
His sword hittet him with a final smash.
He stabbed him to end his pain...
Third version (Good)
They began to fight because XYZ was so in rage.
He slashed his sword an... hittet him.
With an scary sound he killed him.
He cleaned up his sword and walked away.


Just give things some details