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07-18-2009, 04:27 PM
wow.. sounds pretty interesting.. i am curious what happens next, again you have used your full potential and made
another awesome prologue (i assume it is one).
btw in which time is it playing.. you said midage.. but is it at the beginning of midage or more at the end?
i haven't found any spelling mistakes nor grammer mistakes until now so all i can say.. GO ON
maybe i might be good if i add these two things..
firstly.. you gotta look or read my story (have rewritten the prologue and finished chapter 1).. i seriously need some motivation, kinda stuck at chapter two
finally.. you have 2 more days left.. so if you want to write a new story.. you still have alot of time .. GO GO GO
but meh your entry is already awesome (and i think either you, zab or magnamancy will win.gif ";)")
)
another awesome prologue (i assume it is one).
btw in which time is it playing.. you said midage.. but is it at the beginning of midage or more at the end?
i haven't found any spelling mistakes nor grammer mistakes until now so all i can say.. GO ON
maybe i might be good if i add these two things..
firstly.. you gotta look or read my story (have rewritten the prologue and finished chapter 1).. i seriously need some motivation, kinda stuck at chapter two
finally.. you have 2 more days left.. so if you want to write a new story.. you still have alot of time .. GO GO GO
but meh your entry is already awesome (and i think either you, zab or magnamancy will win
)
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should totally allow people to be all trolley on their birthday
should totally allow people to be all trolley on their birthday