07-18-2009, 05:32 PM
Good prologue as always... You know how to impress peoples with your descriptions.gif)
But action didn't started yet. You only described some parts of the island and some peoples who live there. While I was reading I hopped that you will put some action in prologue, but there is no. And still I am interested in your story again.
I am waiting for 1. chapter
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But action didn't started yet. You only described some parts of the island and some peoples who live there. While I was reading I hopped that you will put some action in prologue, but there is no. And still I am interested in your story again.

I am waiting for 1. chapter