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The man from the lighthouse
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07-20-2009, 01:51 PM (This post was last modified: 07-20-2009, 01:51 PM by The Lost Global Mod.)
awesome chapter.. really catching..
2 mistakes though..
1. it is "the villagers weren't sure" and not "the villagers wasn't sure ... plural my friend ;)
2. mistake is connected to plural too even if it isn't really a mistake.. the most common plural of fish is in fact fish (fishes counts too.. just wanted to say it ;) ).. (same with sheep i think)
other than that.. GO ON.. i am curious
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The man from the lighthouse - by Reaper - 07-18-2009, 02:32 PM
RE: The man from the lighthouse - by Lord Anu - 07-18-2009, 05:32 PM
RE: The man from the lighthouse - by Reaper - 07-20-2009, 01:36 PM
RE: The man from the lighthouse - by The Lost Global Mod - 07-20-2009, 01:51 PM
RE: The man from the lighthouse - by Reaper - 07-23-2009, 04:03 PM
RE: The man from the lighthouse - by Reaper - 07-27-2009, 09:57 AM



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