Well the top isn't going to be my story kinda messed up a little.
I hope you like this part better also Kay can you tell me what is confusing.
EDIT: Can some one suggest a title.
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Nick and Elias are two boys from different realms. Nick is from a forgotten land that he can't remember. Elias is from a world know as 'Verlorene Zeit' or 'Forgoten Time' a world that time changes fast compare to other worlds. Both of them where sended to Merol, a land in the great world know as Genar, by unknown forces to Man, Elf, Dwarve, Dunejet, Dead, or the Ancients. They appear to be in one body but it changes during day-time and night-time. It seams as they are to be bond to each other in unknown way that keep them together yet far away. They start on there quest simple as it can be but as time goes there quest will be harder then it seams, it may be to bring eternal peace or the opposite maybe to a perfect world. Wherever there quest might be they will have to do there best.
Laying in the grass in the middle of some place where you have never bean before. Your head hurts some much if you drank 10 barrels of bear mixed with vodka, that I never tried before but have sean some man have a good party with beard and vodka and feal so horrible in the morning.Also you have no idea what your name is and have no clue of your past. That is how I feal right now from some unknown event. I strode up and looked around me, it was night and a beautiful one. I heard a stream running down not far away. I soft breeze was blowing. I strode up and walked towards unknown direction. I wondered for hours, that I haven't track down. I looked up at the sky and now I could barley see the moon now and in the east there was bright light and I fall and didn't know what had just happen.
'Uh , I have no clue what had happen in the past 5 minuets but I feal like some one beat the crap out of me .' I sat up and looked around me and it looked like a forest with lots of trees and mostly what any normal forest would have accept a fox mixed wolf like creature near me and smelling air for a pray I think. Then that creature growled but it looked like hissed at me and ran away. 'That was really weird, really.' I looked once more around me and I found everything quite strange to me around this place cause there so many thing that I have never saw in my life.I started to walk towards rushing water sound and there I found a waterfall, and glowing blue butterflies flying around a girl. She had long brown mixed with radish color type of hair and a white dress. "Ah, hello, who are you," I asked her but she ran away. 'More and more odd things coming, will this ever end,' thought to my self.'Well I'm kinda thirsty, might as well take a sip.' I took my hands and got a handful of water and drank it. "You should be drinking that," a soft voice sade behind the bushes. "Wait can I ask you something." Before I started to chase her she already ran away.
Laying in the grass in the middle of some place where you have never bean before. Your head hurts some much if you drank 10 barrels of bear mixed with vodka, that I never tried before but have sean some man have a good party with beard and vodka and feal so horrible in the morning.Also you have no idea what your name is and have no clue of your past. That is how I feal right now from some unknown event. I strode up and looked around me, it was night and a beautiful one. I heard a stream running down not far away. I soft breeze was blowing. I strode up and walked towards unknown direction. I wondered for hours, that I haven't track down. I looked up at the sky and now I could barley see the moon now and in the east there was bright light and I fall and didn't know what had just happen.
'Uh , I have no clue what had happen in the past 5 minuets but I feal like some one beat the crap out of me .' I sat up and looked around me and it looked like a forest with lots of trees and mostly what any normal forest would have accept a fox mixed wolf like creature near me and smelling air for a pray I think. Then that creature growled but it looked like hissed at me and ran away. 'That was really weird, really.' I looked once more around me and I found everything quite strange to me around this place cause there so many thing that I have never saw in my life.I started to walk towards rushing water sound and there I found a waterfall, and glowing blue butterflies flying around a girl. She had long brown mixed with radish color type of hair and a white dress. "Ah, hello, who are you," I asked her but she ran away. 'More and more odd things coming, will this ever end,' thought to my self.'Well I'm kinda thirsty, might as well take a sip.' I took my hands and got a handful of water and drank it. "You should be drinking that," a soft voice sade behind the bushes. "Wait can I ask you something." Before I started to chase her she already ran away.
EDIT: Can some one suggest a title.
I am back, not really.