02-27-2010, 03:19 AM
Okay I have got lots of changes in here and I know only nobody will read this but oh well.
The Story (Click to View)
A boy comes from another world into an unknown realm to him. He forgets everything about him, who he is, where he is from, who is his family, who are his friends. He only knows what really is memorable. He kinda knows how to fight but not that much, he does has wide imagination but what good does all that has to him in here.
Laying in the grass in the middle of some place where you have never bean before. Your head hurts some much if you drank 10 barrels of bear mixed with vodka, that I never tried before but have sean some man have a good party with beard and vodka and feal so horrible in the morning.Also you have no idea what your name is and have no clue of your past. That is how I feal right now from some unknown event. I strode up and looked around me, it was night and a beautiful one. I heard a stream running down not far away. I soft breeze was blowing. I strode up and walked towards unknown direction. I wondered for hours, that I haven't track down. I looked up at the sky and now I could barley see the moon now and in the east there was bright light and I fall and didn't know what had just happen.
'Uh , I have no clue what had happen in the past 5 minuets but I feal like some one beat the crap out of me .' I sat up and looked around me and it looked like a forest with lots of trees and mostly what any normal forest would have accept a fox mixed wolf like creature near me and smelling air for a pray I think. Then that creature growled but it looked like hissed at me and ran away. 'That was really weird, really.' I looked once more around me and I found everything quite strange to me around this place cause there so many thing that I have never saw in my life.I started to walk towards rushing water sound and there I found a waterfall, and glowing blue butterflies flying around a girl. She had long brown mixed with radish color type of hair and a white dress. "Ah, hello, who are you," I asked her but she ran away. 'More and more odd things coming, will this ever end,' thought to my self.'Well I'm kinda thirsty, might as well take a sip.' I took my hands and got a handful of water and drank it. "You should be drinking that," a soft voice sade behind the bushes. "Wait can I ask you something." Before I started to chase her she already ran away.
'Guess no reason to go after her.'
"He,he"
"Who's there!?”
'Probably my imagination, well there no reason to stay here better start going.' I started to walk to outside of the forest but it was so big.
'Hmm, should I go to that sign over there or , nah I will just go the sign it might lead me to a city or it can be a warning.'
'Finally reached the sign, man I thought it was closer. It says … what? What the hell does it says there, man its not even English related or any language that I had saw. Walking would be a a good thing to do but man am I hungry.'
So I walked where the sign was pointing.
* * *
So then the boy walked towards the path that lead where he didn't knew where it lead. After a while he reached what looked like a dead end. 'Man I guess I walked here for no reason.' Thought the boy. Then he started to hear really quite footsteps. “Who are you intruder?”
“Huh who's there.”
“I should be asking you that, I am in charge of here.”
“Well I got some bad news for you I have no clue who I am so I'll be leaving now, cya.”
“Such quite words for a young foll.”
“You sound young too you know.”
“Well I guess I have no choice but to kill you, Proeliator of Nex here is your next victim.”
Than I man with black armor, a shield, and a sword came out of the shadows in the forest.'Whoa, this guy looks really tough.' Thought the boy. The warrior charged at the boy. The lad dodged simple by turning 90 degrees. Then he jumped back. The warrior than started to spin, which made it look like a sword tornado. The lad ducked and at the same time spinning with one of his leg trying to trip the warrior. It worked but the warrior got up really fast and bodied slamed the lad. He started to roll back and got to his feet again and started to ran towards the warrior. Both of them tried to slam each other but the boy was kinda fast so he was able to slide between the warriors legs, and slammed him from behind. The man got to his feet and said, “well done for some one that young but you don't have so much time to life.” At that moment the warrior started to ran towards the boy with his sword towards his head. The boy remained calm. When the man got so near that they could feel each other breaths everything was to quick to be seen. One thing for sure was that some one was dripping blood. The man's face was in shock while the boy's looked calm. The boy was holding the same sword that was about to kill him in the enemies chest. He than drew the sword away and threw it into a tree, and than kicked the man and he fell. “Where are you?”
“Wow, nice job.”
“Now tell me where I am or I'll kill you.”
“Funny.”
“Whats funny that I killed one of your man.”
“You know, you just killed the best swordsman in this area.”
“He didn't look so tough.”
“For real he was tough.”
“I told he didn't seam so tough.”
“To tell you the truth, the two things we do here when one of out best warrior dies , one we kill the killer, two we reward him if he is one of our people.”
“So I guess I'm going to die.”
“You might not die if the blackness will save you, so I guess you will d-”
Before the other boy could say anything a black hole appeared near the lad who killed the warrior and he was swallowed.
'Wow, the is hard to believe. He was saved. I guess I'll need to thank him for killing Proeliator of Nex, he was getting on my nerves and he did got the enemy weaker. I wonder why does the blackness come so random, so impracticable. Well I guess I'll go back and scream at the man, this job is so much fun, knowing that you work for one side and can betray it easily which I'm planing to do.
* * *
'Where am I, who am I, where am I from?' “Funny, I'm asking the same questions to you.”
“Who's there?”
“I'm no importance to you.”
“Well do you know who I am?”
“I did said that I have the same questions as you.”
“Well where am I.”
“Well right now your nowhere.”
“Nowhere?”
“Yes, your in darkness which nothing is in here.”
“So, I'm dead?”
“No, your just traveling.”
“Traveling?”
Laying in the grass in the middle of some place where you have never bean before. Your head hurts some much if you drank 10 barrels of bear mixed with vodka, that I never tried before but have sean some man have a good party with beard and vodka and feal so horrible in the morning.Also you have no idea what your name is and have no clue of your past. That is how I feal right now from some unknown event. I strode up and looked around me, it was night and a beautiful one. I heard a stream running down not far away. I soft breeze was blowing. I strode up and walked towards unknown direction. I wondered for hours, that I haven't track down. I looked up at the sky and now I could barley see the moon now and in the east there was bright light and I fall and didn't know what had just happen.
'Uh , I have no clue what had happen in the past 5 minuets but I feal like some one beat the crap out of me .' I sat up and looked around me and it looked like a forest with lots of trees and mostly what any normal forest would have accept a fox mixed wolf like creature near me and smelling air for a pray I think. Then that creature growled but it looked like hissed at me and ran away. 'That was really weird, really.' I looked once more around me and I found everything quite strange to me around this place cause there so many thing that I have never saw in my life.I started to walk towards rushing water sound and there I found a waterfall, and glowing blue butterflies flying around a girl. She had long brown mixed with radish color type of hair and a white dress. "Ah, hello, who are you," I asked her but she ran away. 'More and more odd things coming, will this ever end,' thought to my self.'Well I'm kinda thirsty, might as well take a sip.' I took my hands and got a handful of water and drank it. "You should be drinking that," a soft voice sade behind the bushes. "Wait can I ask you something." Before I started to chase her she already ran away.
'Guess no reason to go after her.'
"He,he"
"Who's there!?”
'Probably my imagination, well there no reason to stay here better start going.' I started to walk to outside of the forest but it was so big.
'Hmm, should I go to that sign over there or , nah I will just go the sign it might lead me to a city or it can be a warning.'
'Finally reached the sign, man I thought it was closer. It says … what? What the hell does it says there, man its not even English related or any language that I had saw. Walking would be a a good thing to do but man am I hungry.'
So I walked where the sign was pointing.
* * *
So then the boy walked towards the path that lead where he didn't knew where it lead. After a while he reached what looked like a dead end. 'Man I guess I walked here for no reason.' Thought the boy. Then he started to hear really quite footsteps. “Who are you intruder?”
“Huh who's there.”
“I should be asking you that, I am in charge of here.”
“Well I got some bad news for you I have no clue who I am so I'll be leaving now, cya.”
“Such quite words for a young foll.”
“You sound young too you know.”
“Well I guess I have no choice but to kill you, Proeliator of Nex here is your next victim.”
Than I man with black armor, a shield, and a sword came out of the shadows in the forest.'Whoa, this guy looks really tough.' Thought the boy. The warrior charged at the boy. The lad dodged simple by turning 90 degrees. Then he jumped back. The warrior than started to spin, which made it look like a sword tornado. The lad ducked and at the same time spinning with one of his leg trying to trip the warrior. It worked but the warrior got up really fast and bodied slamed the lad. He started to roll back and got to his feet again and started to ran towards the warrior. Both of them tried to slam each other but the boy was kinda fast so he was able to slide between the warriors legs, and slammed him from behind. The man got to his feet and said, “well done for some one that young but you don't have so much time to life.” At that moment the warrior started to ran towards the boy with his sword towards his head. The boy remained calm. When the man got so near that they could feel each other breaths everything was to quick to be seen. One thing for sure was that some one was dripping blood. The man's face was in shock while the boy's looked calm. The boy was holding the same sword that was about to kill him in the enemies chest. He than drew the sword away and threw it into a tree, and than kicked the man and he fell. “Where are you?”
“Wow, nice job.”
“Now tell me where I am or I'll kill you.”
“Funny.”
“Whats funny that I killed one of your man.”
“You know, you just killed the best swordsman in this area.”
“He didn't look so tough.”
“For real he was tough.”
“I told he didn't seam so tough.”
“To tell you the truth, the two things we do here when one of out best warrior dies , one we kill the killer, two we reward him if he is one of our people.”
“So I guess I'm going to die.”
“You might not die if the blackness will save you, so I guess you will d-”
Before the other boy could say anything a black hole appeared near the lad who killed the warrior and he was swallowed.
'Wow, the is hard to believe. He was saved. I guess I'll need to thank him for killing Proeliator of Nex, he was getting on my nerves and he did got the enemy weaker. I wonder why does the blackness come so random, so impracticable. Well I guess I'll go back and scream at the man, this job is so much fun, knowing that you work for one side and can betray it easily which I'm planing to do.
* * *
'Where am I, who am I, where am I from?' “Funny, I'm asking the same questions to you.”
“Who's there?”
“I'm no importance to you.”
“Well do you know who I am?”
“I did said that I have the same questions as you.”
“Well where am I.”
“Well right now your nowhere.”
“Nowhere?”
“Yes, your in darkness which nothing is in here.”
“So, I'm dead?”
“No, your just traveling.”
“Traveling?”
I am back, not really.