Elias' Stories

[Reaper]

and I know only nobody will read this but oh well.

Don't bet on it.

A boy comes from another world into an unknown realm to him. He forgets everything about him, who he is, where he is from, who is his family, who are his friends.
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Your head hurts some much if you drank 10 barrels of bear mixed with vodka, that I never tried before but have sean some man have a good party with beard and vodka and feal so horrible in the morning.Also you have no idea what your name is and have no clue of your past.

Uhm... Did I get that right? He forgot who he is but still knows how it feels like to be drunk? Probably thats one of the things that are really memorable I for myself find my family and friends a lot more memorable.

I sat up and looked around me and it looked like a forest with lots of trees and mostly what any normal forest would have accept a fox mixed wolf like creature near me and smelling air for a pray I think.

It would really be great if you could less "and". Additionally the structure is sometimes a bit confusing.

"Who's there!?”
'Probably my imagination, well there no reason to stay here better start going.' I started to walk to outside of the forest but it was so big.

As far as I got it, the boy says both those sentences. Well, then there should at least be a sentence between saying that there was no one answering.

So then the boy walked towards the path that lead where he didn't knew where it lead.

Is the perspective change intended? And has it a special use?

The warrior charged at the boy. The lad dodged simple by turning 90 degrees.
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It worked but the warrior got up really fast and bodied slamed the lad.

Try using the "warrior and lad less often. Mixing it with the boy, his enemy, etc. would be better here.

The man's face was in shock while the boy's looked calm.

What did you say in the beginning? He kinda knows how to fight but not that much?

“You might not die if the blackness will save you, so I guess you will d-”

That just sounds a little weird. Maybe add something in between like "but thats highly unlikely".

'Wow, the is hard to believe. He was saved. I guess I'll need to thank him for killing Proeliator of Nex, he was getting on my nerves and he did got the enemy weaker.

I begin to wonder how cool the people in there are
Anyway, its already a lot better than your first try, especially in terms of length. The end of this parts left some questions open so there is a reason to read on. There were quite some Grammar and spelling errors, and the structure made it a bit hard to read, but it still was within the limits.
On the other hand however the people weren't really acting like normal people would do, for example that man in the end and also the boy.
And similar to the last time: The boy forgot everything. How do we have to imagine that? Obviously he still knows how to talk(), somehow also how it feels like to be drunk and a party with a lot of alcohol but not where he came from( contradiction?).
You know, I can't imagine how it is like if you know absolutely nothing about your past. Can you? Because you need to if you write about it. I mean, not knowing where you are, ok, then it would fit pretty good, but not knowing about who is your family?
Still, a lot of improvement, hope you go on that way.