03-20-2010, 04:21 AM
It seems like an interesting piece of DC'ing. Personally, I think you should spend more time on the characters you're already making, and finish them. However, this seems quite nice, if a little overpowered. Perhaps you should give more of a description of the character, what he does, and all that stuff
Henry David Thoreau Wrote:Let your life be a counter-friction to stop the machine.