Taniaetc: The Beginning

[Taniaetc]

Thanks Magna (can I call you that?).
I'm atm not @ my laptop so I won't be able to update the story.
Also I'm thinking about a new title, "Knights of Silent Voice" isn't that good?
People who're good in writing stories I NEED YOUR HELP!
edit: Updated the story in grammar issues. Now it's fixed. Thanks again!