04-30-2010, 11:41 PM
Okay I wrote more stuff and some of the first page have been edit by me and friends from school. Just the first page.
Also this part is a little bit interesting, just a little bit because their are a lot of new people, 11 of them, most of them I haven't written about.
Also this part is a little bit interesting, just a little bit because their are a lot of new people, 11 of them, most of them I haven't written about.
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Chapter II
part 2
The Organization
Ten figures were siting on chairs that almost looked like thrones. Their were waiting for one more person to come. The man came shortly. “Why were you late Lugarus,” asked one of the man that had deep voice, almost as an aged man. “Sorry, something really interesting happened, something that might change everything that we have seen.”
“Changing the whole future by one event, huh, funny that is, now that you mentioned it I can see the future is all clouded.”
“See.”
“Well what is this event that happened?”
“A person had just 'moved' into our world and one had just died.”
“That's normal Lugar, you should know better, their must be balance as long as there are no wars.”
“Yes I know but the balance doesn't kill another man by sword but by natural means, or just make a person crazy so they kill them self to balance of the world.”
“So are we balanced or not.”
“I think either, it might be a war that is coming up.”
“So you say this magician or a man with high skills transported himself into here and will start a war.” said another man with a lighter voice.
“I'm sorry to disappoint you Saru, I now you like any man with high intellect and I like any beautiful girl and lads that are my age or younger, and that person who came here was a young lad, but I couldn't get any information from him.”
“So who send this boy or how did he get here,” asked Saru.
“Well as I said I couldn't get any information.”
“So you're saying he is defended from getting his mind,” said a fourth man.
“No, he just simply forgotten all his memory.”
“So someone erased it,” asked Saru.
“No, he remembered some 'music' from something he called Final Fantasy.”
“Huh, I heard that name before, but really long time ago, I just can't remember,” said the man in the furthest left.
“That's good, we have some information.”
“So, is he traveling by him self,” asked the first man.
“No, he is traveling with a girl, her name is Lorean, she is not from my area, not sure from which area she is.”
“Well I remember I child named Lorean in Koluras, but she moved when she was four years old, and since then I never heard of her,” said Saru.
“So wise man Maruis (the first man), what will we do now?”
“From now on all of us will have couple of jobs, one is to keep watch of our own area, I'll tell you later but not right now. I must think over all the events that had happened. For now you are all dismissed.”
Now everyone stood except Maruis who was in deep thoughts. Everyone went their way except Lugar and another man who didn't speak during the meeting. “So what did you see Robert,” asked Lugar .
“You really know who's mind to read, don't you Lugar.”
“You are the only one who can see the future the farthest and you did saw something, don't try to lie to me.”
“Well yes I did see an event, an event that I really think will ever happen. It has you in it.”
“So what is it?”
“What I saw was a memorial, or a gravestone of someone and that someone was you Lugar, I could only see your name on the stone. The scenery was green plains, with many colorful flowers, it really looked like a masterpiece of someone who really likes nature, but let me get to the point. A stone with your name on it was on the ground and there came a girl in a blue dress and she carried one flower. She placed the flower on the stone and smiled. She said something that was really interesting and important but the whole scene of that future I can't see for some odd reason. It feels like someone showed me it and that is it. Sorry I would say everything but I just don't know.”
“Don't worry I know you told me everytрing. So basically your saying that I'll become a mortal.”
“Yes, strange, for us to become an mortal. That looks impossible, many tried and many failed.”
“Yes, but who knows, the Five did turn into mortals and still had their power and everything.”
“That is not really true, its a thought, some say they died, other say what you just had. I believe that they are alive, especially after that vision.”
“You mean that you didn't see that but some one showed it to you.”
“Of course, each time I see an event in the future it sticks in my memory, but when someone shows or tells me something I can forget easily even if it is something important.”
“That makes sense, but only time can tell the future.”
“Wait.... I just saw another scene, it is the same one, but there are thirteen people here now, three girls and eight lads. Non of them I have ever seen before.”
“More and more interesting things are happening.”
“Well let's go and see this boy.”
“Oh, and don't call him boy, Lorean gave him a name,Lallya.”
“That sounds very odd, I wonder why she named him that.”
“I don't know we can check them out and maybe find out.”
So both of them walked through a door.
part 2
The Organization
Ten figures were siting on chairs that almost looked like thrones. Their were waiting for one more person to come. The man came shortly. “Why were you late Lugarus,” asked one of the man that had deep voice, almost as an aged man. “Sorry, something really interesting happened, something that might change everything that we have seen.”
“Changing the whole future by one event, huh, funny that is, now that you mentioned it I can see the future is all clouded.”
“See.”
“Well what is this event that happened?”
“A person had just 'moved' into our world and one had just died.”
“That's normal Lugar, you should know better, their must be balance as long as there are no wars.”
“Yes I know but the balance doesn't kill another man by sword but by natural means, or just make a person crazy so they kill them self to balance of the world.”
“So are we balanced or not.”
“I think either, it might be a war that is coming up.”
“So you say this magician or a man with high skills transported himself into here and will start a war.” said another man with a lighter voice.
“I'm sorry to disappoint you Saru, I now you like any man with high intellect and I like any beautiful girl and lads that are my age or younger, and that person who came here was a young lad, but I couldn't get any information from him.”
“So who send this boy or how did he get here,” asked Saru.
“Well as I said I couldn't get any information.”
“So you're saying he is defended from getting his mind,” said a fourth man.
“No, he just simply forgotten all his memory.”
“So someone erased it,” asked Saru.
“No, he remembered some 'music' from something he called Final Fantasy.”
“Huh, I heard that name before, but really long time ago, I just can't remember,” said the man in the furthest left.
“That's good, we have some information.”
“So, is he traveling by him self,” asked the first man.
“No, he is traveling with a girl, her name is Lorean, she is not from my area, not sure from which area she is.”
“Well I remember I child named Lorean in Koluras, but she moved when she was four years old, and since then I never heard of her,” said Saru.
“So wise man Maruis (the first man), what will we do now?”
“From now on all of us will have couple of jobs, one is to keep watch of our own area, I'll tell you later but not right now. I must think over all the events that had happened. For now you are all dismissed.”
Now everyone stood except Maruis who was in deep thoughts. Everyone went their way except Lugar and another man who didn't speak during the meeting. “So what did you see Robert,” asked Lugar .
“You really know who's mind to read, don't you Lugar.”
“You are the only one who can see the future the farthest and you did saw something, don't try to lie to me.”
“Well yes I did see an event, an event that I really think will ever happen. It has you in it.”
“So what is it?”
“What I saw was a memorial, or a gravestone of someone and that someone was you Lugar, I could only see your name on the stone. The scenery was green plains, with many colorful flowers, it really looked like a masterpiece of someone who really likes nature, but let me get to the point. A stone with your name on it was on the ground and there came a girl in a blue dress and she carried one flower. She placed the flower on the stone and smiled. She said something that was really interesting and important but the whole scene of that future I can't see for some odd reason. It feels like someone showed me it and that is it. Sorry I would say everything but I just don't know.”
“Don't worry I know you told me everytрing. So basically your saying that I'll become a mortal.”
“Yes, strange, for us to become an mortal. That looks impossible, many tried and many failed.”
“Yes, but who knows, the Five did turn into mortals and still had their power and everything.”
“That is not really true, its a thought, some say they died, other say what you just had. I believe that they are alive, especially after that vision.”
“You mean that you didn't see that but some one showed it to you.”
“Of course, each time I see an event in the future it sticks in my memory, but when someone shows or tells me something I can forget easily even if it is something important.”
“That makes sense, but only time can tell the future.”
“Wait.... I just saw another scene, it is the same one, but there are thirteen people here now, three girls and eight lads. Non of them I have ever seen before.”
“More and more interesting things are happening.”
“Well let's go and see this boy.”
“Oh, and don't call him boy, Lorean gave him a name,Lallya.”
“That sounds very odd, I wonder why she named him that.”
“I don't know we can check them out and maybe find out.”
So both of them walked through a door.
I am back, not really.

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