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my poetry
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MOTHERS SUNDAY
she cares for you
each and every moment you live,
every movement you make.
makes sure you dont go beneath.
Not just for her sake
She took copious pain
to have given you birth
The earth seems big to look,
when you compare it to the mother's heart,
its like a tiny drop of water in mighty oceans
Mother takes esctacy
when the tot cries.
she takes it as the tot console,
her for the pains and cries:
told on a mothers sunday.

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my poetry - by MnM - 05-25-2010, 06:23 PM
RE: my poetry - by lf2TimmE1 - 05-25-2010, 06:50 PM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-26-2010, 05:26 AM
RE: my poetry - by Bamboori - 05-26-2010, 05:04 PM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-26-2010, 05:51 PM
RE: my poetry - by Alectric - 05-26-2010, 11:05 PM
RE: my poetry - by LutiChris - 05-26-2010, 11:19 PM
RE: my poetry - by Marshall - 05-27-2010, 12:16 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-27-2010, 04:29 AM
RE: my poetry - by Alectric - 05-27-2010, 05:26 AM
RE: my poetry - by hell fightter - 05-27-2010, 05:50 AM
RE: my poetry - by Alectric - 05-27-2010, 06:53 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-27-2010, 09:28 AM
RE: my poetry - by hell fightter - 05-27-2010, 10:14 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-27-2010, 10:44 AM
RE: my poetry - by Bamboori - 05-27-2010, 11:13 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-27-2010, 11:57 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 11-06-2010, 03:24 PM
RE: my poetry - by The Lost Global Mod - 11-06-2010, 04:26 PM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 11-06-2010, 04:31 PM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 11-11-2010, 12:17 PM



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