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my poetry
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actually u understood it but u cannot express it correctly. ok here is description:

The poem is about the characteristics of mother. the mother cares for the child , each and every moment the child lives and care of each and every movement it makes. she looks the child with care and makes sure it doesnt go beneath. she does all these things not just for her sake but with a reason that it needs to shine.The mother took lots of pain to have given birth to child. The earth seems big to look but when you compare it to the mother's heart it is like a tip point of a hook (like safety pin) .The mother takes happiness when the child cries . she takes it as the tot console her for pains and cries. These things are told on a mothers sunday.
I need some C&Cs pls i need it fast.
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my poetry - by MnM - 05-25-2010, 06:23 PM
RE: my poetry - by lf2TimmE1 - 05-25-2010, 06:50 PM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-26-2010, 05:26 AM
RE: my poetry - by Bamboori - 05-26-2010, 05:04 PM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-26-2010, 05:51 PM
RE: my poetry - by Alectric - 05-26-2010, 11:05 PM
RE: my poetry - by LutiChris - 05-26-2010, 11:19 PM
RE: my poetry - by Marshall - 05-27-2010, 12:16 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-27-2010, 04:29 AM
RE: my poetry - by Alectric - 05-27-2010, 05:26 AM
RE: my poetry - by hell fightter - 05-27-2010, 05:50 AM
RE: my poetry - by Alectric - 05-27-2010, 06:53 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-27-2010, 09:28 AM
RE: my poetry - by hell fightter - 05-27-2010, 10:14 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-27-2010, 10:44 AM
RE: my poetry - by Bamboori - 05-27-2010, 11:13 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-27-2010, 11:57 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 11-06-2010, 03:24 PM
RE: my poetry - by The Lost Global Mod - 11-06-2010, 04:26 PM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 11-06-2010, 04:31 PM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 11-11-2010, 12:17 PM



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