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Oliver's short stories
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Wow...you have a way with words, don't you? :)

I really liked the thoughts about evil in the beginning, it fits perfectly. However, I'd like to see some elaborating on how that evil became Julian.
Basicly, I want you to explain the inexplicable :D

Other than that, I really like it.
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Oliver's short stories - by oliveryungo - 07-22-2010, 06:46 AM
RE: LF2 Prologue - by Divisor - 07-22-2010, 07:44 AM
RE: LF2 Prologue - by oliveryungo - 07-22-2010, 09:05 AM
RE: LF2 Prologue - by Reaper - 07-22-2010, 11:43 AM
RE: LF2 Prologue - by oliveryungo - 07-22-2010, 11:51 AM
RE: LF2 Prologue - by Divisor - 07-22-2010, 12:03 PM
RE: LF2 Prologue - by oliveryungo - 07-23-2010, 04:53 AM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by Alectric - 08-14-2010, 11:06 AM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by Ascor - 08-14-2010, 11:22 AM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by Taniaetc - 08-14-2010, 12:28 PM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by oliveryungo - 08-15-2010, 06:10 AM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by Taniaetc - 08-15-2010, 06:16 AM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by oliveryungo - 08-15-2010, 06:20 AM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by Reaper - 08-15-2010, 04:18 PM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by oliveryungo - 08-22-2010, 04:33 AM



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