Bla bla's sprites

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Hey.Long time no sprite . Anyways i've made a new sprite that is acctually an idea for my next character (i know i haven't finished Philip yet):

It's a mix of Tsubasa from beyblade metal masters and Charm caster from Ben 10. I named him Chard. Also i don't want to be too detailed cause it's for a character.

[ossiee]

finally you updated your sprites...... shading is very nice, and hair is good but you need to work on the legs.... try to improve it
keep the good work

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Can you please say what is wrong with the legs? I know they are wrong but i don't know how to fix it 'cuz i don't know the problem. :S

[ossiee]

the legs are too fat and too short..... you see your legs direction is wrong too,

made a pictuer in paint to show you how you do the legs and they should be (Click to View)

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[Gespenst]

Not always legs suppose to be like you showing ossiee
Look at firzen.

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But the leg is facing the right way (like ossiee said in the second picture). Why do you think it's not?

[Gespenst]

But the leg is facing the right way (like ossiee said in the second picture). Why do you think it's not?

Not always legs suppose to be like you showing ossiee

i do not think, but i meant that legs not suppose to be always like ossiee showed

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so the sprite is okay or not?

EDIT: Here's a little fix ( i just realized the legs were too short):

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Here's a new sprite (totally made from scratch):

What do you think?

[ossiee]

well, its better then the one befor him, a biig improvement i see, a little things you need to improve:
-the sprites looks fat
-more contrast in shading
if i find more things to improve in your sprites i will help you to fix them