ForgetLatios's Sprites

[Lunar]

Lining on the highlights looks too sharp for clothing
Either curve some bits or round it off so it looks more natural

[forgetlatios]

ok- i've decided i've reached a level of DC and spriting where i feel i'm good enough to make my rep char. i made it perfect as i can, while at the same time not so detailed. note that i'm writing this before doing the sprite :P

woody style

[forgetlatios]

since no comments... i am forced to dp.

edits:
fixed chin
shading on pants more visible

[XLittlebob252]

something about hes back is annoying me like he has a bump on the back.
(sorry dont know how to say)
fix that please.
other than that is pretty nice

[forgetlatios]

sry i don't see anything thr(maybe its my monitor...)
i cut off some parts thr and... lol i realised that the pant-shading didnt change. either its too weak or i ctrl-z'ed too much.
now i'm lacking ideas. tho i could try spriting that guy as my rep-char... once at least more than 5 people approve. and not newbs.

[snorsorbet]

His right shoulder looks 'sucked in', try making it broader and angle the right arm less.

[The Lost Global Mod]

+ the tips of his hair are too thick. Thats why it looks different from the general hair you would expect in a sprite.
Especially put an eye on the left side (our view) of the hair. Also I think the hair is missing some flow, well there is flow but in the middle part of the hair something is bothering me, I am not sure how to express it. Look into that again (maybe you see it).

[forgetlatios]

im mostly worried about the amount of work i have to do... but meh
the pants were kinda bugging me. meight change that. (typing at 7:42PM gmt +8)
about hair, i figured out how to do that while "playing"(spamming) sprite game yesterday ^^
thanx to hunter

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lulz took me close to an hour...(the hair totally got meh stuck)

[MnM]

nice sprite . i want few tings to be improved:
1)his eyes seems to be looking slightly towards us.
2)the left(to us) hand has broken pixels at the corners.... bit sharp.
3)boots is kind weird....

nice job...

[forgetlatios]

1) the eyes are on purpose... "slightly" ;D
2) mmh? sry my monitor's 5 years + long time at com disallows meh to see that.
3) lol ur right... imma lazy. change it later

4) thx ^^

edit: i figured out #2...

kayz here's my result assuming i follow all the above.