Bla bla's sprites

[Jahvansi]

good, but u gotta practice a lot spriting hair, this stilllooks unnatural and not hairish

[Marko pro]

Use the smallest brush size and then draw a strand of hair and then with a little lighter color do the final line.
or you can do hair such as john ...

[drako]

EDIT: New "warmup" sprite:

This time it's Ky from Redakai: Conquer the Kairu. That's the last of the designs i liked.

You need to take a look at his jacket. His jacket seems to be so straight. It is not natural. You need to give it some curves. Shading is better. Keep it up.

[Bla bla bla 44]

Because i've been chosen for the revamps sprite contest i wanted to make one more sprite for you guys to revamp:

I found this character design on google so that's why it's so accessoried.

[Marko pro]

Good.
Look like a scarecrow really nice.His left shoulder strap should be thinner and not so rotated.
Really nice choose of collors...

[drako]

Really nice choose of collors...

You mean colours. Right?
@ Bla bla bla 44
Yup, the colour composition is nice. I see the improvement in shading. You just need to add some strokes on his hair and they'll look nice. Keep it up

[XLittlebob252]

are you using the same base all over again?
cause i think you should change a little bit

[Bla bla bla 44]

Umm no i make new bases for every sprite. Are you trying to tell me to change the pose?

[XLittlebob252]

no it just looked like you're using the same base everytime, but for a begginer i think you should use already existing bases
it will help you build up your own ability to make bases

[Bla bla bla 44]

I usually take a Dennis sprite, then i make a sketch with white colour, then i delete the dennis layer and i make a new layer for the skin. In the end i delete the white sketch layer and then i make a new layer for the clothes and hair. That's how i make my sprites.