Hari's scribbles

[The Hari]

What's wrong with this animation?

[Jahvansi]

im not sure, either the head should be from half back view in the third frame or the torso position+position of his right arm shoulder shouldnt change

thats the only thing i can come up with atm...

[MoragWan]

Looks good but..his legs..I think they should be more rotate..
and I also think that his head shouldn't stay at the same state all those three sprites..

[Gad]

maybe try to move his head a little too
it's too static comparing to the twisting body

[Sonic Boom]

its looking like he is not even moving his other leg

[Marko]

thrid frame is wrong. that shoulder aaah

[Gespenst]

hari, instead of making your own pose, try to stixk with the already exsisting ones.

[Jester]

What's wrong with this animation?

Nice sprite man Is he what you mentioned in our talk?
Third frame doesn't look so logical. It reminds me about the warm up move in my sport class: High-knee running xD

[The Hari]

Woah, 7 posts telling me that this sucks, easy, I got it with second one ^^
I just wanted to copy movement of original Leo:

And already noticed that head should be rotated more in last frame, but didn't do it, since neither of original characters rotates head during running. Anyone saw Dennis?

Actually I thought, there is something wrong only with his legs and that's why I posted it. The easiest way to improve it, will be probably remake of third frame, but I'm gonna do it when most of the sheet is done.

hari, instead of making your own pose, try to stixk with the already exsisting ones.

Yes, you're right, that would be much easier and effect would be better. Just so what? Isn't drawing your own templates allows you to learn more and faster? And who really want to watch another "skins" of characters, instead of fully original ones?

[Gespenst]

hari, exactly, I said try to stck with exsisting one, which I mean original leo, because yours looks strange