Dnilb sprites

[Marko]

nice... now try lf2 style (small chibi style characters)

[Monolanier]

nice... now try lf2 style (small chibi style characters)

Should he realy do that?
I mean if a guy wants to stay with more realistic size, why not to go that way?

ofcrs there is nothing wrong with that

[Dnilb]

I might try lf2 style later :P, anyway here's new one:

[Dnilb]

Trying out new shading style:
Update:

Refrence: http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/onep...0906155747

GIF of the progress:

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I am not sure on how the bat should be shaded, also I am not happy with the face (kinda tried to go for this: http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/onep...1208185709)

[Dnilb]

I would appreciate some feedback on those 2 sprites to see if I am improving and to know what I am doing wrong.

[MnM]

The red and black one is cool!
On the new one:
I would say the pose is quite good but the legs need to be spread out a bit(his right leg) speaking of center of gravity. Shading is good. Proportions is okay but his right arm seem to be bit longer than his left.Other than that maybe you could add one more darker shade of color.Great sprites. Keep on practicing the face details and shapes of muscles. you will eventually get better." Never leave a doubtful pixel in your sprite/pixel without your knowledge/blindly"

[Hate]

I don't see anything wrong with it, the legs are fine, also try making a simple breathing or walking animation.

[Marko]

Yes, his leg could be wider a bit, but the real problem is head.. it's totally misplaced... It makes sprite imbalanced, falling to left side. The red line should be passing through the center of the neck. The diffrence might seem small, but is huge in sprites, espacially in pixel ones where every pixel is important.
Piece of advice, stick to layer of structure lines while drawing (simple guide lines, like main, just so you don't lose yourself in that "mess")

[Dnilb]

Gintoki from Gintama

Refrence: https://encrypted-tbn2.gstatic.com/image...2LHEWSmb1w

[Dnilb]

Josuke: