[Char] sasuke

[ossiee]

fixed the standing

by the way when his standing why is his hand out like that

i dont think its bad do you

[drako]

I guess there is a problem with the left arm dude, i'ts not balanced properly.

[ossiee]

ohhh.... dont look at the little details its my first in my next char i will pay attention to small things

here he is hitting


jutsu hand signs

[chonkasaurusbotato]

Jutsu is fine. Punching is a bit strange because:

1. He moves his legs too much
2. He is moving his hands very strangely

Overall it is good

[symaroth1]

this char is going really well for your first try
his hand dislocates 2nd - 3rd frame
and in one frame his shirt hangs out a bit
but overall some char i wana play now

[Gad]

Yah. For a first character this is perfect. I see you're working pretty fast and well.

Some critique here:
1. Making sasuka is uncreative, there are already sprites for him in the internet. But if you want to keep doing it, nice, I hope it will make you a better spriter.
2. His head looks a bit strange. Try to remake it basing on Woody's or Davis' original face. Sasuke's eyes and mouth look realy weird here and completly not like in anime.
3. I don't get why is he standing like that? Why is his left arm positioned that weird? I suppose that you could make it more LF-ish and put his left arm to the 'standard' position, like original LF2 charas has it.
4. Try to base some moves (like punching, walking and running) on original LF2 charas, so it will look more natural, since you're not pro in doing your own bases (no offence, you're just a beginner).

I wish you luck and enough patience to finish this project, or to start new one, more creative.

[Dominate]

i say do what gad said to you (most of them)
because hes right i dont wath that cartoon but you profile picture shows us how sasuke should be

[ossiee]

thanks you all, will do my best to make better.

[Dominate]

ok ossiee if you want continue this project but if i were you i will try to make me myself better on spriting and data
because if you do this you willl make more good projects

[ossiee]

made chidori, say what to fix