My sprites (chase123)

[MnM]

good solution for proportions : watch ur own body ( that does helps!) or watch more cartoons or watch more pics. Its up to u how u undergo training.

[chase123]

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[Marshall]

oh, it has harry potter glasses

[Ragor]

@Marshall: O lawdy
I dunno... Needs more improvements

[chase123]

Well,how's this?


The sprite before this was a remake of my very first spriting attempts,the guy was weird at the first place,it was hard to make him look good.

[fire power]

wow awesome it is like a mage ninja combo

but I think you should add like a sword or something that is stuck on he's back but he can still use it

[Reaper]

Nice one. A bit more contrast on the hood would be good, though.
The stuff on the cape, however, seems a bit random. Additionally, it shouldn't go below the character's feet. Check Firzen for reference and search for a frame where his cape looks the way you imagine it to look on your char.
Remake actually doesn't look too bad, but hair needs a bit of work and I just don't like the colours. Contrast is a bit low and on the legs there isn't too much shading. But you're right, it's possibly due to the former sprite. The new original sprites are much better.

[LutiChris]

Most of the time i would avoid spriting anything bellow the legs, as i see it as a limit...
abs look pretty good but a lil far apart, like 3-4 pixels WIDE! get in the habit of making them around .5-2 pixel
when i mean .5, it's just silly way of slightly covering over it (with the opacity)
also refer back to google images or Julian's/Justin's toes, cuz the feet are like blocks (shoes)

As Reaper already mentioned...
the positive thing i see is that u distinctively separated the two shades of skin colors (it's important to have contrast)
sadly i don't see it in the rest of sprite, such as the cape, clothes, and cuffs...
i like the idea u were going for, similar to apoc but no ice yet... :P

Damn you Reaper for ninja'ing me...i should have woken up earlier

[chase123]

I like this sprite,although the eyes need some work:


Also with a sword and changed pose:

[Ragor]

That pose seems too unrealistic. Please fix it... for the newbies man...