Bla bla's sprites

[Akira Saito]

I think that you are great spriter! :3 But sheet is very difficoult think to do. When i make stacne sheet, first i make breathe in, then breathe out. It's look better then.

Great job!

[Marko]

I think i understand what you are trying to tell me. But if you could show me with a picture that would be better. :P

maybe later in pm :P EDIT: private message, inbox in this forum haha

Animation is too fast, not big deal, just to point out..

torso seems to looks wrong rotated, unnatural, but i am not sure.might edit sprite if i find time for it
well, 1 color hair its not always the case.. most of the time it has shading.. in this sprite it should has.

Still, you have to practise faces expression and whole head, same as i should practise..

[Bla bla bla 44]

I think that you are great spriter! :3

Thanks! :3 But i still do need a lot of training. :P

maybe later in pm

Where's that PM Marko?!

torso seems to looks wrong rotated, unnatural, but i am not sure.might edit sprite if i find time for it

I would be glad if you could edit it.

Still, you have to practise faces expression and whole head, same as i should practise..

I am aware of that...
Anyways new sprite incoming!
- Byrne
- Reference

[InPhiKnight]

He is a bit fat compared to the reference. Needs shading in his red color inner shirt. Cheeks need to slimmer!
LIKE THE PANT SHADING

[NewToTheEra]

from where do you take such reference :o link please

[Bla bla bla 44]

He is a bit fat compared to the reference.

LF2 sprites are a lot different from the mugen-ish sprites. They should look fatter as they are chibi. But he may look slightly fat compared to a normal LF2 character...

Needs shading in his red color inner shirt. Cheeks need to slimmer!

- Better?

LIKE THE PANT SHADING

Thanks! I tried to make it as similar as the reference.

from where do you take such reference link please

http://network.mugenguild.com/seanaltly/ - Go to character bios
It's a project by Sean Altly named Shades of Manhattan. I have few of those characters on my MUGEN so i make them LF2.

[Gespenst]

if you are trying to make such things, like for tshirts, you wont make any good.
mine way is 1st and yours 2


you always make like its some 1 object is on 2 nd object.

you make it on every kind of outfit

even on this kind of outfit



you got reference, but you do not using it.




why not to spend more time on details and less on rushing it?

LF2 sprites are a lot different from the mugen-ish sprites. They should look fatter as they are chibi. But he may look slightly fat compared to a normal LF2 character...

actualy these sprites are edited kof, sf and more games... sprites

[Marko]

i dont have to pm you anymore.. he explained everything (i also had some other things in mind)

some feedback

This dark line on his shirt have job to split chest muscles and abdominals parts(well, chest muscles and abdominals through shirt makes shading like this).. atm in your sprite line has to low position, that makes chest muscles huge and abdominals too small.

Agree with Exg9 you should learn making small details like wrinkles on his shirt, strands of the hair etc.(using 1 px brush, make smtgh like exg9's example)

[Gespenst]

go make this guy.
Anji.



@Marko, you dont need to quote all big text.

[ossiee]

oooo! this guy is interesting, looks fun....
btw, i think this guy
is missing some details like: muscles, hair shading(i know there is, but its not so detailed)
chest shading could be better(just like exg9 explained)
and he is a little fat, not like in the normal sprite...
except for that, you did a great job, and pants shading is just too awesome... continue the great work!