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how about now? I still wasn't too sure about the face, but you guys get to decide.
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I like it.
Also old face all the way.
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09-14-2013, 06:06 AM
(This post was last modified: 09-14-2013, 06:06 AM by betitngoan.)
![[Image: miki0_edit3.png]](https://trello-attachments.s3.amazonaws.com/51740b75e142e57c22000a74/51740ba059056b896d00348a/6398cc9998c26e9bf8ddc5c4fc7c9e88/miki0_edit3.png)
this one is ... Flawless ( i won't say "perfect" because it's too old i said it too much)
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![[Image: miki_fp1.png]](https://trello-attachments.s3.amazonaws.com/51740b75e142e57c22000a74/51740ba059056b896d00348a/e568568bd989a4a1522fd9256babe481/miki_fp1.png) Miki's face pic
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I like face expressions.
So, u making character of it?
Asking since u made face pic.
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09-21-2013, 07:57 AM
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EXG9 Wrote:So, u making character of it? lol i dunno, i like to tease you guys with a couple of animations and soon after let them die! muahaha
![[Image: miki_run_test1.gif]](https://trello-attachments.s3.amazonaws.com/51740b75e142e57c22000a74/51740ba059056b896d00348a/673eef7e8c5a7af13f18324d37a67dd3/miki_run_test1.gif) anywho, does this run look good to you?
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(09-21-2013, 07:57 AM)LutiChris Wrote: EXG9 Wrote:So, u making character of it? lol i dunno, i like to tease you guys with a couple of animations and soon after let them die! muahaha
anywho, does this run look good to you?
hah. U are like me 
teasing with animations and face pics 
animation looks good.
@ Hari if you will come here. See, luti made similar runnin to leo, and luti did great.
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(09-21-2013, 07:57 AM)LutiChris Wrote: EXG9 Wrote:So, u making character of it? lol i dunno, i like to tease you guys with a couple of animations and soon after let them die! muahaha
anywho, does this run look good to you?
Personally, the upper body is lacking some left-right shoulder sway. Not sure if you'll get what I mean by that. Other than that, well... I can't quite get my eyes off the lack of body sway so I don't see anything else at the moment. haha.
"I may devour the five continents, and swallow the three seas, but a body with neither wings, nor hands, nor feet, is powerless against the sky."
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1) DO NOT PM ME
2) Go read up on anatomy and proportions online. (google is your best friend)
3) Go read up on pencil sketching-shading.
4) Practice by making FULL character sheets. (Refer to bases and references if you have to, occasionally try doing things from scratch. You have to mix both methods; bases and without.)
5) DO NOT be an arrogant, self-righteous prick when people try to give useful critiques, and ignore the ones who are flaming idiots. (Flaming them back makes you one of them.)
6) Repeat steps 2 to 5 until you're happy, or you think you're good, then start sharing your knowledge with your fellow spriters.
7) Showcase your sprites. At first, do not be discouraged when you don't get any critiques, or lousy/generic critiques. Continue practicing and showcasing your work. With more sprites, it will be clearer what your strengths and weaknesses are, and people may be better able to give you better critique.
Lastly, if you think saying all this makes me an arrogant, self-righteous prick who is too selfish to share his knowledge...
Then I say you cannot recognise wisdom when I've just slapped you in the face with it. (Also, those steps are the same steps I used to get to where I am, I don't know any way else to truly learn.)
Unless you think its worth my time, go F*** yourselves. I'm not going to bother to even reply to PMs like "can you help me make this character?" anymore.
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Hmmm, what I also spoted, Not sure if she does not have a neck or her shoulders are in too high possition.
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i think you may add some motion on her mouth. To make it look like she is breathing deeply.
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