Bla bla's sprites

[Sonic Boom]

I think u know the basic shading....
but u make the sprites body very much puffy like a balloon and make the head comparatively smaller...
Try to fix these things and u will improve

[Bla bla bla 44]

I've made a new sprite. I've tried a new hair style. He is a guy who can raise plants. That's what he is doing in the sprite. So here it is:

[chase123]

Take it easy....If you do sprites like this you will never gain experience as you will not pay attention to shading,detail etc.
For the sprite:
The power he is casting on the plant should have a glow on his clothes,it looks unrealistic the way it is now,the hair looks a little too big,and the left shoe looks big as well.
You have got the basic shading right.His eyes and expressions do not account to what he is doing and they look a little strange.

[Bla bla bla 44]

OK, here i made another one. Until i make it best i can i wont post another.Here it is:

[Dominate]

do shade on the cape

[Gad]

You're still rushing.
Be more patient and spend more time on spriting.

[The Lost Global Mod]

You're still rushing.
Be more patient and spend more time on spriting.

True, but:

Until i make it best i can i wont post another.

so he is expecting critique from us to improve it until it is all fixed up. So give him some power-critique, mastermind!

[Bla bla bla 44]

OK. Since no one critiqued that one here's another one. I tried to make it on 200% for first time. Also it's pretty simple. So here it is:



Oh and half of the feet are missing .

[Monolith]

nice,but your body looks bit to big for his head try to like lf2 chars have.
try to do ears like in this davis pic

[Bla bla bla 44]

Ok. I made him thinner and the ear is smaller. Here it is: