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[Electric2Shock]

I think you need to learn to place the cape on the correct place. You can remove the cape from the face. It looks bad. The hair on the 2nd one is very dusty, I like the 3rd one though.

[NewToTheEra]

i on my will make the cape like this aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[InPhiKnight]

Agreed with Electric Shock and Dan please remove the cape from the face

[Marko pro]

1st - white background. nononono
2nd - too blured
3rd - little better
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still needs improvement..pratice make perfect
do not post sprite here which you are not pleased enough!

[NewToTheEra]

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is there some thing wrong with the blade

[Monolanier]

You make some details to stand out more than other.
Like armour plate which black outline stand out most and which disturbs to look at other details, you should learn how outline works.
Cape looks like sheet of metal, give it some movement make it like real cape, not metal one.

[InPhiKnight]

dan the blade looks like a piece of aluminium. Try to give the inside part of the cape dark compared to the outer part.

[NewToTheEra]

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hahahhahahah

[InPhiKnight]

! Is this your sprite?
I don't think so
This is your drawing

[NewToTheEra]

the thread says my stuff