Revamped Sprites (52%)

[Silverthorn]

Mmmh, the balance is a little off. Look at how the spine goes if you were to draw it into the sprite. It currently goes like this: \ . Better would be | or, considering there is somebody at (in?) his back, even a /-like position. Thus, you balance out the composition.

Also, the facial expression is a bit funny. One rarely sees D:-faces. Don't know if that's intended or not but I guess I'd prefer a more menacing grimace. Just my two cents.

Nothing else to complain about, really; shading is superb, as usual.

Oh, just a quick question, is the skeleton intended to have a squid-like skull?


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[The Lost Global Mod]

^yo blue, i think you accidentally unstickied the thread.

Alectric edited this post 04-04-2012 08:10 AM because:

Re-sticky-fied'd'd'd

[DoIIIi]

not bad, it could going to be a close voting

[Alectric]

Thanks for the feedback!
@BP, the squid skull is intentional!
And my gosh, the face took so long to get there. My hand was getting tired from having drawn the rest of the sprite and i attempted the face at least 20 times before i settled on the current one.
I see what you mean with the balance of the composition but it was largely intentional as the skull guy is sort of doing a vaccum-life-force-suction thing.
It was kind of intended to look like his move was to summon a demon-squid-skeleton-with-knives-for-hands and in the process having all his physical form pulled into the demon.

I drew version 1 intending on having the demon from version 2, so it looks weird without it :P

But yeah, thanks for the feedback, hopefully i can get those things right for the next sprites!

[Ariel]

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open to CC ^^

[Alectric]

He is very tiny, but the design overall is good.
His face freaks me out a little bit, it looks like he is going like:

with bigger lips though :P
Its just the mouth that freaks me out haha.

[Hero destroyer]

You mean like "THE WALKING DEAD".
Anyways, good proportions and shading though.
Wooow! So much entries!

[Ariel]

better?

[lf2TimmE1]

totally looking like apoc spriting style...new version looks better

[hell fightter]

ill try do myne today later D: would it fit deadline?