Whaat's Sprites

[bashscrazy]

from your previous post of the dark character-
awesome job
but you really need to work on your animations
stop leaving the first image in each frame lol

[Whaat]

from your previous post of the dark character-
awesome job
but you really need to work on your animations
stop leaving the first image in each frame lol

Yeah, i would like to do that, but i don´t know how xp
It seems to be little buggy when i copy the pics from GIMP to GIMP :/ with paint there never was this problem but i want the back color to be transparent.
And Apoc:
Could you also comment and not only press the thank button xp ? I would really appreciate your critics and tips ;<

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Okay, tried to make somekinda of werewolf, but i totally messed the head, i tried to remake it like 5 times but it still is horrible (and big) D:

Here is version without head xp

Feel free to make the head :3

made breathing for headless wolf xp (too fast again)

Again tried to fix the vid, but unfortunately the transparency ruins it ;<

[Apocalipsis]

And Apoc:
Could you also comment and not only press the thank button xp ? I would really appreciate your critics and tips ;<

No... I can't. Because:
1. I'm lazy to construct a post.
3. My opinion is not really that important.

But now that you dragged me out of the darkness... work on contrast and study the relation between body and heads on your sprites more closely.

(I may be a bit intolerant in these days because I started university and I don't have time to sprite. And if I have, I don't feel like doing it/I'm tired, so yeah...)

Edit: I have been a bit rude... I'll elaborate my critics a little:

Your poses and proportions seems to be very good at this point. It's just that you don't know wich head size fits your style. Do a simple sprite and start spriting heads of different sizes until you get something you're confortable with. Or if you're lazy to do that, use the head of an original LF2 sprite as reference. This is one of the things you can do to improve right now (Btw, don't get frustrasted about the wolf head, you may be used to draw normal heads but these are a whole another thing, it's hard to do at first).

The second thing you can improve right now in my opinion is the contrast between the different colors. You seems to shade really good but it's barely visible because the lighter/darker color are very seemed. For example, in the werewolf sprite at first glance I see just a grey shape for the 'skin' and a purple shade for the pants. Use brighter colors to make highlights, I'm pretty sure it will look way better like that.

Also, you should try photoshop. You won't be dissapointed.

[bashscrazy]

Use photoshop to make the animations like me
unless you don't have it - then nevermind.

nice pants - reminds me of DOC CONNERS from Spider-Man with his ripped purple pants lol

[Whaat]

Ok, i tried to fix the contrast of my shading and it went kinda well imo :/

Legs are too thin :/

[empirefantasy]

Fire,looks so good.While he have not any light at his hair,which should come from fire.

[bashscrazy]

Fire,looks so good.While he have not any light at his hair,which should come from fire.

I see light in his hair.
Red light, like his hair.
So it's hard to notice it.
You have to look real close.
Like this awesome staircase?

@Phil - lol didn't notice that - a fail poem lol

The Lost Global Mod edited this post 04-03-2011 08:31 AM because:

lol the beginning kinda sounded like a poem xD

[Whaat]

Apoc, thanks for your long rep.
Bash, i don´t have PS xp should really get one :/
empiref, your argument is invalid, there is glow like Bash said.
And new sprite (remake) (tried to fix the contrast of shading that many have commented):
-> there's no eyes cuz it's pain in the a** to make them when head is tilted (right word?) :/
And yeah, PF inspired me with that John+Henry sprite where is same kinda of ''magic bow''.
I'm kinda pleased with the result :/
E. Edited the first post.

[Ariel]

i very like ur last sprites and this one the most
this one very cool
i can see u improve very much! ;D

[Simoneon]

What I especially like about you, is that you have a certain style of spriting, which I really love. I think it's the only thing you need, really (as well as proportions and picking colours, too...)


Also, in an unrelated theme,
I really liked lutis style back then, now it is over-exaggerated (?) in all ways. I liked his demon char, it was very nice Not saying the quality dropped now, but just doesn't please my tastes