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04-08-2011, 03:12 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-08-2011, 03:41 PM by LutiChris.)
thanks guys...oh wells i'll sprite a new one of her ~later :P
it's a drag to edit her...but ya i totally get whut u guys were saying
here's another one...
![[Image: angelica_by_kaywonnjuto-d3dhv5f.gif]](http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/098/0/0/angelica_by_kaywonnjuto-d3dhv5f.gif) Angelica
this took me awhile...i'm a lil bothered by the shading or just the proportions of her thighs/legs
anyone know whut i could do to improve on her?
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I like it a lot! Looks awesome! .gif ";)")
noticed the blinking haha
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worried abt thighs and legs? well, it seems kinda male-ish then? ( to me though :P ) Other than that, i dig the details. esp the hair. (did u use tab for it?
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04-08-2011, 04:47 PM
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^Yeah i did...thanks
u got me confused when u said "kinda male-ish" in whut way is it male-ish? :P
edit:
no i was unsure 'bout the shading of it, her knees seem to be a bit too low, but if i pull it up it'll make the rest of her legs thin
i could fatten her legs up...might look sexier
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and no she's not either of those... :P
but who am i to stop u from labeling her that way...
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04-08-2011, 04:49 PM
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Well, u were worried abt the thigh and legs. I thought it looks kinda male-ish (not other things unless she is ...)
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Now thats a great sprite 
love the blinking!
I see your style is influenced by chibi a lot these days, big heads, pretty big eyes, big hands :P
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It looks a bit awkward when her tits are enormous but her waist is nothing special. The shoulders are also a bit broad.
It could be on purpose though, maybe she has performed plastic surgery but is a bit male shaped.
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(04-09-2011, 04:25 AM)snorsorbet Wrote: It looks a bit awkward when her tits are enormous but her waist is nothing special. The shoulders are also a bit broad.
Agreed. You could add some mass to the hips to correct that... but I think the broad shoulders are fine. Could always chalk it up to the shoulder pads on that jacket or armour thing.
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I honestly love it. I can imagine her hacking other characters to bits with that giant sword
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04-12-2011, 03:50 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-12-2011, 04:43 PM by LutiChris.)
thanks guys^^
![[Image: F7PJ4.png]](http://i.imgur.com/F7PJ4.png) fixed her hips a bit & tried to visibly show fingers in her right hand (might be a bit blurry)
![[Image: allison_by_kaywonnjuto-d3dtlu5.png]](http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/102/a/9/allison_by_kaywonnjuto-d3dtlu5.png) Allison?
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