Revamped Sprites (52%)

[Jernemies]

You, Marshall, are my most helpful nitpicker ^^
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...though it's not too visible, but meh, better than the old one.

still anything major?

[LutiChris]

reminds me of whut whaat does...just in comparison (not on his entry ofc)
you might want to enlarge it to show detail... (such as the face)
feet are facing too inward take his left foot so it's facing away from the other foot and more in the direction like his hand
shading on his right isn't the same like u did on his left side...
you also want to emphasize that he's throwing a grenade and not a snowball...imo :P
but yea feels like it's a whole lot better than ur first entry

V) i honestly would start all over if i were u...

[Jernemies]

did i overdo the glow?
@luti: taken note of, ty nitpicka =>. enlarging is not gonna be done for him, tho.

Marshall edited this post 06-29-2011 09:42 AM because:

arm w/o the globe of energy seems shorter, don't you think?

[LutiChris]

so whut do u think? :P
old new


if u didn't notice the difference it was merely darkening her right cheak and forehead
-ripping the pants where the knees meet
-& ofc animating the cape...

[Jahvansi]

the animation is super smooth!
very nice

[DoIIIi]

no eyes animation?

[LutiChris]

@Doj
Well the old one has 3 frames for blinking so...
it would screw up the sequence of the new 8 frame gif
but ya know whut i think i will consider it + breathing (if i have the time)

[Sonic Boom]

Really Smooth!
Do you make them in flash?

[betitngoan]

so whut do u think? :P
old new


if u didn't notice the difference it was merely darkening her right cheak and forehead
-ripping the pants where the knees meet
-& ofc animating the cape...

look like Raven

[Daymio]

nice one luti but why isn't she blinking on the 2nd animation?



here's my entry of joker