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Jahvansi's sprites (Arcane)
Very nice sprites I like them! Good job! You just need to practise a bit more on your shading work and after that they will look gorgeous.
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@^ uhm can u pls tell me what is wrong with my shading? just telling that it is wrong doesnt help me, i got to know what is wrong so i can improve it ....
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Not that it's wrong, I guess, but not enough perfect. You just don't put light correctly, how it should be.
For example: her right arm shouldn't be just half shaded. Arm is more like a cylinder than a cuboid.
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(07-29-2011, 02:23 PM)Gad Wrote:  Not that it's wrong, I guess, but not enough perfect. You just don't put light correctly, how it should be.
For example: her right arm shouldn't be just half shaded. Arm is more like a cylinder than a cuboid.

Ya! It's probably what I meant to say mundvoll_ I never said that the shading is wrong but
instead I recommend you to practise shading to make it look perfect!
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The facepic i made for Jeff:

[Image: Jeff_face.png?t=1312645482]
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Nice but, not LF2 style...
BTW I like those lines!
I make them often too when I draw.
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1. 'jagged' outline
2. Weird/bad looking ear
3. His right eye is kinda rotated
4. Collar looks flat
5. Random spiky hair.
6. Uncorrect shading of face.

That's critic from me.

Work on face proportions, try to draw faced from source instead of imagining them.
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Okay in the last days xlittlebob252 and me often played the spritegame just between us.
Here are the sprites we made:

1.[Image: th_edit0_base.png] -> [Image: th_edit5bybob.png] by mund,bob,DH

2. [Image: th_edit0base.png] -> [Image: th_edit4bob.png] by bob,mund

3. [Image: th_Edit0Base-1.png] -> [Image: th_Edit3bob.png] by bob,me
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Whoo Hoo!
Nice Collaborating Sprites!!! :D
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nice sprites
love the first one the best ;) (I'm pretty sure you can tell why lol)
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