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(09-15-2011, 01:28 PM)bashscrazy Wrote: (09-15-2011, 12:33 PM)Monolith Wrote: (09-15-2011, 12:23 PM)Whaat Wrote: Whoa whoa, really nice, BUT.
Again the color combinations, it seems like it's not your best part xp I would make him like black and red colored (+hair that could be smthing ''normal'' like brown or blond).
Or well, another color combination fix could be:
Change pants (green) to black and hair (blue) to red/blond. no offense,but i have to say one thing,realy.Sometimes you sound bit girly,like you will be buying some chlothes from my shop,no offense realy.Who are you,some stylist?
u see i don't like to see all hairs brown,blond,dark,red
Thats why i'm making various things
I thought you weren't gonna bash critiques anymore and just say that you prefer something else instead... -_____- i accepted critiques,but i said something that i wanned to say,i havent said "I'm not gona do i because you are not boss'',if you missunderstand,i like to mix various colors for
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(09-15-2011, 01:49 PM)Monolith Wrote: (09-15-2011, 01:28 PM)bashscrazy Wrote: (09-15-2011, 12:33 PM)Monolith Wrote: (09-15-2011, 12:23 PM)Whaat Wrote: Whoa whoa, really nice, BUT.
Again the color combinations, it seems like it's not your best part xp I would make him like black and red colored (+hair that could be smthing ''normal'' like brown or blond).
Or well, another color combination fix could be:
Change pants (green) to black and hair (blue) to red/blond. no offense,but i have to say one thing,realy.Sometimes you sound bit girly,like you will be buying some chlothes from my shop,no offense realy.Who are you,some stylist?
u see i don't like to see all hairs brown,blond,dark,red
Thats why i'm making various things
I thought you weren't gonna bash critiques anymore and just say that you prefer something else instead... -_____- i accepted critiques,but i said something that i wanned to say,i havent said "I'm not gona do i because you are not boss'',if you missunderstand,i like to mix various colors for
regarding the bits in red:
Even though you said "no offense"
stuff like "Who are you, some stylist?" sounds very sacarstic, and contradicts your "no offense."
Although the "no offense" worked okay for the "sometimes you sound a bit girly" part, because that doesn't sound so sacarstic, as its in a simple statement of fact form, and not a rhetorical question form like the other one.
Btw, I'm just using those words so you can search them on google if you're interested in checking out the difference, if I've not explained it well enough.
That's probably why people still think you're bashing critiques.. even though as you say you did explain why you don't agree with the opinion even while accepting it.
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1) DO NOT PM ME
2) Go read up on anatomy and proportions online. (google is your best friend)
3) Go read up on pencil sketching-shading.
4) Practice by making FULL character sheets. (Refer to bases and references if you have to, occasionally try doing things from scratch. You have to mix both methods; bases and without.)
5) DO NOT be an arrogant, self-righteous prick when people try to give useful critiques, and ignore the ones who are flaming idiots. (Flaming them back makes you one of them.)
6) Repeat steps 2 to 5 until you're happy, or you think you're good, then start sharing your knowledge with your fellow spriters.
7) Showcase your sprites. At first, do not be discouraged when you don't get any critiques, or lousy/generic critiques. Continue practicing and showcasing your work. With more sprites, it will be clearer what your strengths and weaknesses are, and people may be better able to give you better critique.
Lastly, if you think saying all this makes me an arrogant, self-righteous prick who is too selfish to share his knowledge...
Then I say you cannot recognise wisdom when I've just slapped you in the face with it. (Also, those steps are the same steps I used to get to where I am, I don't know any way else to truly learn.)
Unless you think its worth my time, go F*** yourselves. I'm not going to bother to even reply to PMs like "can you help me make this character?" anymore.
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09-15-2011, 07:55 PM
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(09-15-2011, 03:52 PM)Siegvar Wrote: (09-15-2011, 01:49 PM)Monolith Wrote: (09-15-2011, 01:28 PM)bashscrazy Wrote: (09-15-2011, 12:33 PM)Monolith Wrote: (09-15-2011, 12:23 PM)Whaat Wrote: Whoa whoa, really nice, BUT.
Again the color combinations, it seems like it's not your best part xp I would make him like black and red colored (+hair that could be smthing ''normal'' like brown or blond).
Or well, another color combination fix could be:
Change pants (green) to black and hair (blue) to red/blond. no offense,but i have to say one thing,realy.Sometimes you sound bit girly,like you will be buying some chlothes from my shop,no offense realy.Who are you,some stylist?
u see i don't like to see all hairs brown,blond,dark,red
Thats why i'm making various things
I thought you weren't gonna bash critiques anymore and just say that you prefer something else instead... -_____- i accepted critiques,but i said something that i wanned to say,i havent said "I'm not gona do i because you are not boss'',if you missunderstand,i like to mix various colors for
regarding the bits in red:
Even though you said "no offense"
stuff like "Who are you, some stylist?" sounds very sacarstic, and contradicts your "no offense."
Although the "no offense" worked okay for the "sometimes you sound a bit girly" part, because that doesn't sound so sacarstic, as its in a simple statement of fact form, and not a rhetorical question form like the other one.
Btw, I'm just using those words so you can search them on google if you're interested in checking out the difference, if I've not explained it well enough.
That's probably why people still think you're bashing critiques.. even though as you say you did explain why you don't agree with the opinion even while accepting it.
well,u see he almost always saying colors are not fit to sprite ----
this is Wache_R-EFAPT-001R
i have made it long ttime ago
which shading looks better at all aspects
v1 or v2 also i have made v2 when sun behind Wache ,but just say v1 or v2
and what i have to improve in my v2,ok
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here black star
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(09-18-2011, 03:43 PM)Monolith Wrote: here black star
Oh sh!t its Black Star! Thats my guy right there. He punches anyone in the face. Even girls.
With that rant aside, I'm happy to know someone did Black Star...if I didnt get to him eventually. Actually I might just sprite him anyway just to see how he'd turn out.
He could use a bit of work. Black star is very lean and your version makes him look plain, stiff, and a bit nerdy. (his pants weren't hiked up that high O_o) I love the shoes and his hair is almost perfect. Nice job nonetheless.
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(09-18-2011, 04:18 PM)Zabobula Wrote: (09-18-2011, 03:43 PM)Monolith Wrote: here black star
Oh sh!t its Black Star! Thats my guy right there. He punches anyone in the face. Even girls.
With that rant aside, I'm happy to know someone did Black Star...if I didnt get to him eventually. Actually I might just sprite him anyway just to see how he'd turn out.
He could use a bit of work. Black star is very lean and your version makes him look plain, stiff, and a bit nerdy. (his pants weren't hiked up that high O_o) I love the shoes and his hair is almost perfect. Nice job nonetheless. i made him in hurry,so thanks,i was having problem with his pants and upper body
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here trudgelmir
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(09-19-2011, 06:43 PM)Monolith Wrote: here trudgelmir
I like how this sprite has been posted in 3 different threads.
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09-21-2011, 05:04 PM
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here sanger zonvolt for gad challenge
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09-27-2011, 07:06 PM
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here new sprite Ian Murphy
i thinked some name that never have mentioned in lf2 sprites,i think
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