01-09-2012, 08:29 PM
Don't really have the time to put everything in coherent sentences, so this list might sound a little... direct :P
- hair shading: contrasts are low, the curliness is not visible. Adding some shiny highlights might help.
- face: I don't see any shading and the expression reminds me more of a wtf-expression, rather than the happy-smiling clown-face. Intended like that?
- legs: seem disproportioned. A bit too short compared to the full body size.
- feet: look too flat. Adding one or two additional pixel-rows could help.
- general shading seems to be all over the place. Try to add shading step-by-step. First, define the body with very simple shapes (the torso, for example, could be a cylinder in first approximation). Then, go from there to add wrinkles etc. Thus, you have defined a light source which stays the same.
Personally, I feel like your last one turned out better than this one. Might be only my opinion but meh.
- hair shading: contrasts are low, the curliness is not visible. Adding some shiny highlights might help.
- face: I don't see any shading and the expression reminds me more of a wtf-expression, rather than the happy-smiling clown-face. Intended like that?
- legs: seem disproportioned. A bit too short compared to the full body size.
- feet: look too flat. Adding one or two additional pixel-rows could help.
- general shading seems to be all over the place. Try to add shading step-by-step. First, define the body with very simple shapes (the torso, for example, could be a cylinder in first approximation). Then, go from there to add wrinkles etc. Thus, you have defined a light source which stays the same.
Personally, I feel like your last one turned out better than this one. Might be only my opinion but meh.
Silverthorn / Blue Phoenix
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