Bla bla's sprites

[Bla bla bla 44]

I'm done remaking that sprite. I made another one. I tried to make muscles but not very good. Here it is:

[chase123]

Positives:
1.Design is good and simple.
2.Muscles look okay

Negatives:
1.It looks a little too congested,It looks like all of his body parts are fixed.
2.Shading on the hair is required.
3.His face also looks a little too big.

[Monolith]

Dont rush it,when you trying to make awesome sprite.
First try to make good pants shading,later upper body (jackets,t-shirt and etc.),skin proportions and shade, face,hairs,you can try to concentrate on one thing till you learn how to make it look good.

[bashscrazy]

This is probably one of your best sprites so far.
As everyone else said
You need more contrast on the hair and pants.

[Bla bla bla 44]

OK. I shaded the hair. Made the head smaller. Made bigger contrast on pants. Here it is:

[Bla bla bla 44]

OK. Since no one commented on that one here's another one:

[Bla bla bla 44]

I have made another sprite (please comment ). Here it is:

[Jahvansi]

really good job on the hair this time!
still the leg part looks a bit wrong, it seems as the legs would get brighter when they are getting near to the boots, which is bit strange.
Furthermore it looks lil bit unusual how he holds the sword.
and... where is his neck? (-> pull up the head a bit ~2px maybe) ._.

summing up, good job, i like it , keep it up

[Bla bla bla 44]

^ Thanks for the tips . Here it is fixed:



So i lifted the head, Changed the sword and I got that light off the legs. Tell me if there is anything wrong with it.

[Bla bla bla 44]

Ok. I've made a new sprite. Here it is:

- Fire ghost

Comments and critiques are always welcome .