Bla bla's sprites

[Jahvansi]

i was really bored so i made that in the hope it will help u

Biiiig Image (Click to View)

hope u get what i mean with the leg part in your sprites now.

also i really like the idea behind ur newest sprite, there were already a lot fire outfits but i havnt seen one like yours yet

[Bla bla bla 44]

WOW. Thanks for the tutorial mundvoll_. I will watch on the legs next time.
About the past sprite. Tried to fix the fire effect. What do you think?:

[ossiee]

now its better, you arre doing good
try fixing legs like mono mundvoll did in your sprite

[Bla bla bla 44]

I tried fixing the legs. But he looked fat. So i made him thinner. Here it is:

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I've made a new sprite. Tried a new standing. Tell me what do you think:



Also i was cleaning my PC and found this:

- Woody with wings

Made in paint.

[Silverthorn]

The filename tells me he's supposed to be a "Fire Ghost". However, he looks quite solid. My suggestion would be to add some streaks of yellow over the red to make him appear a bit more "ghostly" (). Don't be afraid of picking bright colors for fire; study the fire-sprites of other characters, check the richfulness of different shades, everything is there from dark red to white. Try something like this as well

Doesn't quite look like like standing, rather like squatting. And that's good, don't stick with creating standing-poses over an over again. Different outfits, different poses. The more, variation, the better.
Also, the placing of highlights & shadows seems to be a bit random. The face indicates a lightsource from the top right, whilst the shins are lit from the bottom (both from the outside, btw. That's not really working as well).

Yeh, perspective of the wings is a tad off. Also, the typical issue with features added: dark character-outlines are still visible, on top of the wings. Shouldn't be.
Shading isn't quite visible, too.

So, hope that was somewhat helpful. Keep going, you're getting there

[Bla bla bla 44]

^ about that woody sprite. I've made it two years ago in paint so it doesn't look good. Also i will try to make some fire like you suggested .
On topic. I've made a new sprite watching this sketch made by Doj ->

The sketch (Click to View)

Hope he wont mind it. Here it is:

[ossiee]

its great your best till now, your improving very fast
now try making legs like mundvoll told you, it will make your sprites look better
very good job!

[Bla bla bla 44]

I think this sprite has better legs. I found out why my sprite legs look like that - it's because i use bat as base . So for my next sprite i'll try to make better legs

[Gad]

Wasn't this sketch made for Doj? I thought HF made it.

Anyway nice progress right there.
Shading got improved, but try to make it more detailed, since shape is kinda bold.

[Bla bla bla 44]

@Gad: i thought it was made by Doj because i saw it at Doj's art.
@on topic: i made a new sprite. I'm not sure about the legs but tried to make them best i can.