Bla bla's sprites

[Gad]

This is probably best of your shapes.

It would be great if you fix his hair. Don't try to shade every single 'spike' on his hair. Those on left shouldn't be so lightened up.
Also shading on his shirt needs to be fixed.


More like this.

[Bla bla bla 44]

I've made a new sprite. Here it is:



Also i've tried to do some animating what do you think:

[Bla bla bla 44]

I've made a new sprite.Tried do detail it a little. Here it is:
- The scarf looks weird i know

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I am continuing spriting even if you don't comment . I've tried to make a revamp of dennis. It's my first. Hope you like it. Here it is:

He wears a soldier camouflage uniform. The gray thing that he is wearing is a backpack. Tell me what do you think.

[Bla bla bla 44]

I've made another sprite(still waiting for comments ). Tried a new shading. Here it is:

[ossiee]

wow, you realy have improved your sprites.
about the first the scraf do sucks and hair looks wierd
the second one's hat goes a little too much to the right and you based it on dennis, you should made all by yourself if you want to remake him, you also have this tut http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread.php?tid=6639
about the last one hes hat looks wierd, hes left leg is not good and the effect isnt good accept that hes shading is very good.
great job , try improve the position.

[Gad]

Spend more time on shaping.

[Bla bla bla 44]

Spend more time on shaping

- Don't get it. Shape the base?
I've tried fixing the legs. His hat is connected to his blouse. Also i've tried to fix the aura by putting just a big circle. Here it is:


EDIT: YAY just became a regular member

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I've made a new sprite. It's Captain Ginyu form DBZ:

[bashscrazy]

The horns should be pointing more to the sides rather than up.
Also he's really fat like all your sprites
and the legs are really short like all your sprites.

[Bla bla bla 44]

I've made a new sprite. This time i have not used a base. It does not look like a LF2 sprite but i am practising my nonbase spriting skills. I've made it on a white background(forgot to change it ). Here it is:

[ossiee]

shading is good but the proportions isnt good, try working on it maybe you will improve.
good luck