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[Atar Jonas]

my first sh*t

[prince_freeza]

not bad.. not bad at all.. i like you shading sense, some dirty outline work left but ok.. do something else, i wanna see what else can you do

[ossiee]

wow, its good great for first one, i want to see more..... keep it up!

[hell fightter]

agreed with gad at al of points especially at last one, great begining

character is kinda square, looks preaty much 2d-ish.. kind of flat. over then this its good begining. Also try to watch your character face to be more symmetrical.

but as i said great work looking forward for more

[Atar Jonas]

here is my hand drawing:

river viiperi (Click to View)

[ossiee]

wow amazing!!! you are very tallented...... everything is amazing but one thing..... his eyebrow is getting out of lines, anyway great job.

[Monolanier]

Nice one.
Even if there is some proportion flaws, still, i havent seen human which might have perfect face proportions,
some humans have different face structure.

[Marko pro]

Fantastic work.I love your arts.I`enjoying.
Really nice shading one the first one and try to paint and second art.
Second art have one "bug".Ears is to much down.(upper wedge need finish where is eyebrow/need be bigger)

Look yourself in mirror if you don`t believe me.

EDIT: btw first one haven`t ears.
You don`t like ears or....?