Phil's mading spriteness

[ossiee]

i like it, great idea about the sprite hes good ,too. keep it up

[prince_freeza]

i think am gonna like your shading as it goes on in the future, very nice. only thing i see you messing up is some shapes like hair spikes or eyes but that totally fine, glad to see you getting better at this

[ossiee]

made this bat, its like your stronger firen:

[The Lost Global Mod]

uhm.. i think i didn't use more than 2 colors for shading, or what else could be so different about my shading?

hm, I gotta overwork that firen once again I think.
@Ossie: yeah, I always thought that bat is a true vampire, so those wings fit him perfectly.

[Silverthorn]

uhm.. i think i didn't use more than 2 colors for shading, or what else could be so different about my shading?

The contrast. Highlights got quite bright. In my opinion, they could've been a tad darker. Anyways, interesting idea, I'd like to see you doing more of these

@ossiee: would be better to post this in your own sprite-thread instead

[The Lost Global Mod]

ah i see, thank you very much for clearing that up, I will take care of that in the future.
You might have to wait for that stuff a little (even more than you already have lol)
I will update this post in 2-3 hours or so again, so I just wanted to point out that I have read your critics and have taken them in account.

edit:
fuuuu too many details got lost.. but here the promised edit

[The Lost Global Mod]

update on that latest one:


annd

big one (Click to View)

please give me critics with visuals otherwise i might not be able to completely fix it up (or give me critics at all)

[ossiee]

ok i will start with this, i dont know what you did with shading, i like the shading on the firen you made and the muscles on shirt needs a little improvement..... anyway good job, and if you want muscles to be good just watch other sprites and you will get the idea, good luck

[Monolanier]

if you want muscles to be good just watch other sprites and you will get the idea.

i disagree, if you want to make some good muscles, look for some muscle anatomy. Looking at other sprites might help you, but you may start to do (lets call it copy) similiar style muscles, unless you want that.
About sprite, nice design, some flaws, but like one member sig say, mistake is other way to do things.

[ossiee]

if you want muscles to be good just watch other sprites and you will get the idea.

i disagree, if you want to make some good muscles, look for some muscle anatomy. Looking at other sprites might help you, but you may start to do (lets call it copy) similiar style muscles, unless you want that.
About sprite, nice design, some flaws, but like one member sig say, mistake is other way to do things.

i didnt talled him to copy i ment look at some sprites and get the idea, but maybe your way is better.......