Revamped Sprites (52%)

[drako]

Nah, just ignore my entry, it's weak anyway.

Come on, Gad. Please upload your entry so that we can see it.

[DoIIIi]

[LutiChris]

dammit Doj! :P

[The Lost Global Mod]

noooo i failed with the deadline D:
(and the sprite as well but that's an ongoing matter for me)

too scared to show, cuz it sucks so hard (Click to View)

lame excuses as to why it sucks so much (Click to View)

- first girl sprite ever
- been ages since i posted in 79 x 79
- outie's sprites are too pwnage, they rip out my mind and soul both with one hit ko!
- lame excuse # 5

hope luti accepts this :S

[Alectric]

I spent probably way too much time on this, but i do love Hell_f's work, so here they are:

original:

version 1

version 2

(at this moment Lutichris, i pick version 2 for final entry)

[ossiee]

wow!!! amazing! i like version 2 more then 1, you made a great choice and sprites!

[Silverthorn]

Mmmh, the balance is a little off. Look at how the spine goes if you were to draw it into the sprite. It currently goes like this: \ . Better would be | or, considering there is somebody at (in?) his back, even a /-like position. Thus, you balance out the composition.

Also, the facial expression is a bit funny. One rarely sees D:-faces. Don't know if that's intended or not but I guess I'd prefer a more menacing grimace. Just my two cents.

Nothing else to complain about, really; shading is superb, as usual.

Oh, just a quick question, is the skeleton intended to have a squid-like skull?


@v: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

[The Lost Global Mod]

^yo blue, i think you accidentally unstickied the thread.

Alectric edited this post 04-04-2012 08:10 AM because:

Re-sticky-fied'd'd'd

[DoIIIi]

not bad, it could going to be a close voting

[Alectric]

Thanks for the feedback!
@BP, the squid skull is intentional!
And my gosh, the face took so long to get there. My hand was getting tired from having drawn the rest of the sprite and i attempted the face at least 20 times before i settled on the current one.
I see what you mean with the balance of the composition but it was largely intentional as the skull guy is sort of doing a vaccum-life-force-suction thing.
It was kind of intended to look like his move was to summon a demon-squid-skeleton-with-knives-for-hands and in the process having all his physical form pulled into the demon.

I drew version 1 intending on having the demon from version 2, so it looks weird without it :P

But yeah, thanks for the feedback, hopefully i can get those things right for the next sprites!