JoHo15´s Sprites

[Bla bla bla 44]

Nice facepic. Clean and well shaded. But it still isn't quite LF-ish but you are getting close to it. Keep up the good work

[JoHo15]

my newest sprite
Alinya

[drako]

Nice sprite. You could have made her a bit more slim. You are improving. Keep it up.

[JoHo15]

i made a new face pic

edit: have fixed the shoulders

[drako]

i made a new face pic

It's too good, joho. You just need to adjust his shoulders since his shoulders are thin and does not fit his face. You are detailing it very nicely, good to see. Keep it up

[JoHo15]

i know that my proportionen are not so good, but it is very hard to draw with the mouse...
on the paper with a pencil it would be easier

[drako]

i know that my proportionen are not so good, but it is very hard to draw with the mouse...

You will be able to draw with the mouse if you practise. It takes time so you need to be patient.

on the paper with a pencil it would be easier

of course, it's easier when you make it on the paper with a pencil. Try posting the drawings you make on paper.

[JoHo15]

@drako
i will post next week my drawings
and a new sprite + face pic
Stormy

[Bla bla bla 44]

The sprite is really good. And the facepic is really cool (shading and all). I think the eyes are not LF2-ish maybe that's the problem with you facepics.

[Trickityhouses]

for that facepic That chin its a bit round on the left and very close to the mouth and the shading it a tad to heavy making her look kinda fat. There is a line in her neck that should extend down more and the shoulders are also way to narrow, if you show the line in the neck you should also do it for her shoulders/collar bone. I feel like the hair is really flat and looks like chunks of paper and dunno why her cleavage is showing at that point in the facepic. Im not a fan of those eyes but the coloring is pretty sharp and the sprite looks really good just not a fan of those eyes like bla bla said.

I can tell that youre getting better so keep it up. also not sure if you can afford one but a bamboo drawing tablet cost like 30-50 bucks. its pretty awesome and would probably make all ur drawing really great. ask for one next christmas if you are really into drawing