JoHo15´s Sprites

[JoHo15]

@Marko
i only fixed the eyes...
here is a new one

[Marko pro]

WOW,this is what we want.Maybe hand isto big (try to do fingers).
Eyes is quite good.Nice disegn clothes.
Keep doing that!!

[JoHo15]

i made a fusion of the two last sprites


is that hair colour better ?

[drako]

i made a fusion of the two last sprites


is that hair colour better ?

Yeah, it's actually better. Just try to avoid a lot of contrast on hair. Keep it up

[Bla bla bla 44]

This is much better. Maybe that sharp shirt is a little weird. Everything else fits perfectly. Keep doing that

[JoHo15]

here is a new sprite

[drako]

here is a new sprite

It's nice. Her face looks male-ish. Her hair has nice contrast.
Keep it up.

[JoHo15]

made a new sprite

[LutiChris]

The design is very cool & her weapon seems to match up with her apparel.
You seem to have forgot the shading for her hair, it looks rather flat
notice how you stopped your shading @ an approximate width for each of the objects, face, clothing, shoes...arms
Her hair is the only one that seems to be devoured by the large ammount of light you had placed on her.
please fix that and her pony tail as well
you're getting better btw

+another thing (this is just my personal opinion)
I find it extremly weird for her to have that as her natural hair color
i don't mind so much but i think it would look better to have a darker color instead (such as her gloves or shorts)
possibly throw out the bright red and make it look browner? i suppose...
or you can just desaturate it, since it looks to concentrated
by all means ignore what I'm saying if it looks any worse :P

+seriously consider on making an animation for her.
performing some sort of mage move on an enemy (I can totally see her as a playable character if you develop her more)

[JoHo15]

i have fix the hair

and yeah she will be a char in a mod on that i´m working