Bla bla's sprites

[ossiee]

realy good!!! you realy got better! you should be very proud of yourself, great job bla bla bla 44!
this is a good sprite but i think his legs are a little short, very hard to notice it.... anyway it looks good.

[Marko pro]

Very good...I havent comment.
I said all in previsouly post.

[Dominate]

WOW its along time i havent visited this site. youv improved alot bla bla bla 44 keep it up

[MnM]

The things i marked with red color needs fixing. The hair obstructs the dimension of the face. Means The face looks flat because of the hair and also because of less contrast in shading.

As for the coat, since it is inner-side of his coat, it shouldn't be that much white. Try adding more grey to it make it look that it is in the back of the characters leg or the inner coat. If it isnt the inner-coat. dont bother :P . Needs more contrast to give the clarity of the image. At the moment i agree with what Just Me said.

[Bla bla bla 44]

Finally got some time to sprite. Here it is:

Its Axel Blaze from Inazuma Eleven.

I had this picture as a reference (Click to View)

EDIT: And yes those white things are his shoes.

[Marko pro]

Why didnt you made him before?Now i cant use it for revamped sprite.
Nice job there.Nice contrast of clothes.
His feet/foot looks wierd.Maybe little to small legs.
Other stuff is great!!!

[Bla bla bla 44]

Thanks ^^. I just thought of an idea to make different clothes for this character.

To a reference of this picture (Click to View)

How about that?

[drako]

It looks nice. You can just put some stroke on his hairs. Improved version is better. ;D Use some more contrast on his face.
Keep it up.

[Marko pro]

SAme base?!?!
Nice...you fix foot, and legs...
Proportionallity base...
The left side of jacket must be larger than the right because it is slightly turned to his left. (Red) to His left hand should be slightly hidden by the jacket (blue).

[Bla bla bla 44]

Not exactly the same base just the same sketch . Here he is with new clothes:

Made him with his soccer outfit...

The reference (Click to View)