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12-04-2012, 07:20 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-04-2012, 07:35 PM by klodasmone.)
Do you happen to be a fellow believer of the broody and hip new Dante?
On a more serious note, first, write your story here, second, I will tell you how not very good it is.
Fight the power!
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At below this, to not expand into a parade:
That is not what I meant. I was (and still am) talking about a script, i.e. what the characters are saying. If you write something, which cannot be pleasant to read on paper, it will never be worth spending your time on a video. Stay well, go to school, read books - everything comes with age, especially wisdom in playwriting. I can't say many use it, though.
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To Dagger94
Please give the link of the video in YouTube. My net connections are slow are I am not able to watch it.
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