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The Battle: Phoenix Revival Quest
Julian:pathetic fools!
Serenity:impossible!
nbaheen:he is not called the Demon lord for nothing and my name is nbaheen not Enbaheen,Purple,also i don't have any 'special' attack you can mimic,thats why i don't shout anything when using attacks,and you are better off not trying to use my abilities and making tons of trouble for yourself and for me
n-evil:i never got the reason why people shout weird names when using some attack
n-good:nor did i
Julian points at Serenity Serena and Kairi and all three of them rise up and explode
the 3 are sent flying down and hit some threes
nbaheen jumps and grabs Julian from the shoulders and they both disappear
after a while a portal opens and Julian cames out with a torn cape and a halfly broken mask and covering his face with his hand
Julian removes his hand and the mask is repaired
nbaheen cames out from another
nbaheen: so much for that idea,why do you wear that mask anyway?
Julian:THATS-NONE-OF-YOUR-BUSINESS!
a giant explosion happens around nbaheen
after the explosion,nbaheen stands
nbaheen:i really made him angry didn't i?
n-evil:yep
Julian:by the way do you think villians take vacation
nbaheen:err...i think they are too busy thinking of plans to take over the world
Julian:yeah,i am done with that,this world is pretty good for nothing,i just came here for revenge
nbaheen:then i guess they can...with a different clothe and look

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Julian: "NOW TO KILL THE THREE GUARDIANS!"
Julian fires several dark beams at Serena, Serenity and Kairi.
PK: "If those hit them, they'll die and so will many others! Kairi's death will cause Claire and Roxas to die, Serenity's death will cause Shaie and Jason's deaths, and Serena's death will destroy the entire planet of Esiësia!"
Julian: "... Uh... Whatever."
Bla bla bla 44 lands on the ground.
Bla bla bla 44: "SPECIAL BEAM CANNON OF CHOCOLATE TORNADOES OF POPCORN BURNING THROUGH THE ANGRY LION FIST OF DARK DESTRUCTION FROM THE PLANET OF NAMEK THAT IS VERY FAR FROM EARTH WITH THE LONGEST ATTACK NAME EVER!" :D
Everyone Else: "What?"
Bla bla bla 44 fires a massive beam that completely makes Julian disappear.
PK: "Where did you send him?"
Bla bla bla 44: "I don't know." :P
Bla bla bla 44 spins around and kicks somebody to the ground. It was Julian.
Julian: "... Ow..."
Bla bla bla 44: "... Does anybody have pie?"
Julian leaps up to grab Bla bla bla 44 but Bla bla bla 44 disappears.
Julian: "What? Where is he?"
Bla bla bla 44: "Up here!" ;D
Julian looks up, only to find himself lying on the ground. Bla bla bla 44 was holding his mask.
Julian: "... What is that Namekian?"
Bla bla bla 44 teleports to behind nbaheen.
Bla bla bla 44: "Finish him off if you want to." :D
The truth... is inescapable. The truth will always come out eventually, no matter what. And once the chains that bind the truth are severed... nothing can stop the truth from coming to light.
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PK: "..."

He turns into a sawblade and dashes into Julian.
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Julian appears flying behind everyone
Julian:I HAVE HAD IT WITH YOU PEOPLE! ARMOH MOKATSA!(that sure was random)
nbaheen: pardon
a sword falls from the sky to Julian
Julian catches it and a black aura appears around him
Julian:HAHAHA!I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS POWER ITS!NOW YOU ALL SHALL SEE THE POWER OF THE ORIGINAL DEMON LORD!
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PK: "Great."

An holy burst got out from PK that hit Julian, rendering his demonic powers useless.

Jenny: "What happened?"

KarjamP: "In PK's homeworld, Christianity was true.
"The Christian God was in his heart.
"When he first visited other worlds, somehow, a fragment of the Christian god came with him.
"The Christian God doesn't mind, as he's technically above time itself, so PK has that fragament with him whereever he goes, even in worlds where God is evil, not the ruler of the universe like the Christian teachings says and even in worlds where he doesn't exists, although in those worlds, he is not at his full power.
"The Christian God hate demons, although he would only be uncomfortable but not necessarily angry to genuinely benevolent demons."
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offtopoic:arr...please keep religion out of all this i am just gonna continue without KarjamP's post
Julian:WEAKLING YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHO THE MIGHTY DEMON LORD WAS DO YOU
nbaheen:who was he
n-evil:demon lord...i think i...ah yes!the mighty demon lord i read about him,though i always thought that he was a mere legend
Julian:YOU HAVE TO BE BLOODY JOKING WITH ME THE GREAT DEMON LORD HAVEN'T YOU READ ABOUT HIM IN SCHOOL
nbaheen:nope,no,nothing
Julian:I REALLY WONDER WHAT THESE HUMAN LEARN THESE DAYS
n-good: so what was this legend
n-evil:well they story goes like this,the original demon lord was the greatest champion of king David the good
n-good: so the demon lord worked for the good side...kinda ironic
n-evil:let me finish,he wasn't born as the demon lord!anyway the story goes like this,that knight had fallen in love with David's daughter,once the demons had attack the kingdom and kidnapped the princess as well as damaged the king's kingdom,the Knight went after them to rescue the princess
n-good:what was the knight's name
n-evil:how do you suppose i know,anyway,he reached the demons' leader but couldn't defeat him,so because of his love and other humanly blahblahs he used a forbidden spell and seal all the demons inside his sword,and that sword became consious and took control of the knight who become the demon lord,but the knight freed the princess and killed himself to make sure he wouldn't do anything destructive as the sword was slowly gaining control over him,and that sword in Julian's hand is the sword of that knight
nbaheen(t):fancy and long story
nbaheen: so Julian i don't suppose we can Seattle this like gentlemen
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(Your character believes the Muslim religion, as evident in his rantings about "Allah". :P
Besides, I didn't say that this world's a christian-based world, just that the there's a fragment of the christian god with PK wherever he goes.

There's plenty of other fiction where people are powered by a Christian God and the like.

Some examples are those vampire stories like those of Dracula, where Christian symbols are used against them.

This is also so if there's catholic priests worshipping God in the story and that they have the power to use holy energy against evil.

Besides, The Christian God is not that powerful in this world {Although he still hates demons}.

I'm not saying that you should become a christian, but simply adding some more of PK's lore into the story {I've been developing his character in my head for the past couple of years, so in my mind, he's actually quite developed}.

In case your wondering there's a trope for the Christian God as well as Greek gods, Egyptian gods, Norse gods, etc. coexist with each other: Crossover Cosmology
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PK takes out a sword, which starts glowing white with holy energy.

Julian starts cowering in fear.

Julian: "Why am I cowering?"

PK: "You BETTER settle this in Seattle like a gentleman."
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(yes its called Islam,but i don't go too far like bring Allah into this,I simply make nbaheen say things about him,i am not saying that you shouldn't make your character believe in your respected religion,just don't go thing like bring God or Jesus(Peace be upon him)(his a prophet in Islam btw)into this,and there is already a ton of gods(higher gods as you referred to them) in this story :P)

Julian hits PK's sword with his own sword destroying it
Julian:SERIOUSLY KARJAM,YOU CAN'T HURT ME WITH YOUR HOLY LITTLE TRICKS,SURE THE ORIGINAL DEMON LORD DESTROYED HIMSELF USING HOLY POWERS BUT I AM SMART ENOUGH TO BUILD A LIGHT/HOLY DEFENCE FOR MYSELF AND COVER SUCH AN OBVIOUS WEAKNESS AND HONESTLY NONE OF YOU KNOW ABOUT THE GREAT DEMON LORD
nbaheen:well a friend of mine just explained to me so i know about him...but about that negotiation
Julian:THERE IS NO NEGOTIATION I SHALL KILL YOU AS A PAYBACK
nbaheen:well if you kill me and 44 it will make sense but why others,they didn't do anything to you
Julian:I DUNNO I JUST FEEL LIKE IT I AM A VILLAIN AFTER ALL
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However, the sword reforms.

PK: "Yawn.
"For your info, my God's holiness is different than the typical holiness you may encounter."
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The sword shatters. A mysterious girl appears.
Girl: "Author Shane is getting furious..."
The girl disappears.
PK: "... I saw her in another variant."
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