10-04-2008, 05:07 PM
and i'm too
i'm REALLY in the story
the other charas interact with me
i'm REALLY in the story
the other charas interact with me
G4F Chronicles II: The LF Empire (Season 1)
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10-04-2008, 05:07 PM
and i'm too
i'm REALLY in the story the other charas interact with me
10-04-2008, 05:08 PM
Let's see if you can make 20 chapters!
10-04-2008, 06:03 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-04-2008, 06:04 PM by Handertaker.)
Battle begins...
Cant wait. i read every chapter many times.
10-04-2008, 06:45 PM
Yehhaa! thanx dude!^^
This chapter is the best one till now! want wait to read more! are you going to become a writer? You have the skillz!
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Let me put it this way:
I repeat myself yet again. In case somebody missed my point, check my other posts Oh, yes, i was once again mentioned! Yaaay! ^^
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10-05-2008, 06:03 PM
It's kinda funny that the two only swedish guys in the forum (who have posted and that I know about) are in the same team...
Is that coincidence?
10-05-2008, 07:06 PM
A few more years and you'll outdo {{insert most famous living author in the world here}}!!!
Just a few more grammar lessons Chapter Ten
A small drizzle began pouring over the Empire’s castle that immediately turned into a full scale inundation of rain. Sonidow and Zabobula stood toe-to-toe on the rooftop prepping for the battle soon to come. Sonidow began laughing menacingly as he held up his long katana that began emanating electricity from it. Zabobula smiled and held up his fists. “I applaud you for having gotten somewhat stronger,” Evil Sonidow said smirking heavily. “I appreciate that,” Zabobula said smiling along with him. Then Sonidow’s smile quickly left his face, “But that’s the only congratulation you will here from me.” ~
Lord Razen pulled out a sword from his waist sheath that was hidden when he wore his royal garb. Azriel who smirked holding a card in his right hand. “There are times,” Razen began as he began examining his sword, “when you think you know someone. And there are times when you don’t know that someone at all. But know I don’t know who any of you are anymore.” Azriel stood silent as Razen continued. “I used to know you, but now I see the ones I knew no longer exist.” “Oh we exist,” Azriel corrected, “We just don’t see eye-to-eye any longer.” “Very well then,” Lord Razen said holding his sword up to his face, “I, Lord Razen, challenge you to combat; to the Death!” “Accepted,” Azriel said bowing as did Razen. “Don’t expect mercy from me.” ~
Drahcir’s tracks were stopped as Blue-Phoenix came down from his hovering blue cloud to face him. Phoenix ordered all of his troops to continue advancing toward the south wall. “I will take care of him myself,” Blue-Phoenix said holding up his weapon of choice; his frozen blade. “You will get out of my way,” Drahcir said, intensely, as he held up his blue-beamed sword, “or I will cut right through you!” “Try it!” Blue-Phoenix yelled as he charged the Lieutenant. ~
Paddy was having a field day taking out Dark Rebellion soldiers left and right. Alec, Dome, Handertaker, along with several more troops backed him up as they tore through the enemy forces. Paddy’s swords began glowing brighter and brighter for every soldier he slew until they reached their limit. “Alright it’s time!” Paddy said smashing the blades of his weapons into the ground. “Everyone stand back! Everyone stood back as Paddy began a ritual. Creating a variety of different hand signs, Paddy pointed his right index finger into the sky and yelled out. “EXORCISM!” As he yelled out that word, a large radial symbol spawned in the ground and began creating cracks in the ground. Paddy pulled his golden swords from the ground and began spinning around violently creating large gusts of winds. The Dark Rebellion troopers began retreating from the area. The blasts of air Paddy’s ritual created began turning into sharp weapons to use against the enemy as they began tearing through forces. Cirno called for the troops near Paddy, “All of you retreat back!” “Dammit Paddy!” Don Giovanni said as his troops began coming towards Cirno’s safe zone., “He just couldn’t wait a little longer before using his Exorcism Magic.” “Where did he learn that freaky power from anyway!” Alec asked. “Long story!” Don shouted, “We’ll talk about that later! For now KEEP RUNNING!” Some Dark Rebellion soldiers saw an opening, to the soldiers retreating towards Cirno’s direction, in the circular onslaught of Paddy’s magic. Alec saw them coming and pulled out an array of daggers within his jacket. He launched them at the incoming soldiers. They all connected. “Good work,” Dome said. “Come on before Paddy’s insane winds cut you up next.” Paddy’s eyes glowed brighter as his gusts of winds quickly began a full scale cyclone. He began ripping through the Rebellion’s forces. Soldiers were thrown every which way, many even lost limbs to his lethal winds. ~
“Noir we don’t have time for this,” Robo said. “We need to end this quickly.” “Oh this won’t be quick,” Lukas interrupted as he removed his cloak and went into a fighting stance. “Hand to hand combat I see,” Noir said switching to his fight stance. “Very well then.” “Noir!” Robo yelled. “Fine!” Noir said, “You go on ahead.” “Wait what?!” Robo said. “If it’s that urgent then go!” Noir said. “Hell, take them three as well. I don’t need any help with these four.” Fice remarked, “Hey, wait a minute! I can fight. Robo, you and Haywire go on to the Empire. Me, Snorbet, and the Frog…” CROAK! “…Oh sorry,” Fice apologized, “Sir Frog, and Noir will take care of them.” Snorbet choked. “Agreed,” Robo said. “Haywire, come.” The two teleported away in an instant. “Oh crap,” Snorbet said, “I was hoping I wouldn’t have to fight. This is a real pain.” “Stop your whining,” Sir Frog said which surprised everyone. Snorbet was wide-eyed. O_O “Well,” Lukas began, “looks like your friends won’t be of much help for you.” “I don’t need them to take you out,” Noir said. ~
A large explosion occurred over the castle’s main building. The battle began! Sonidow and Zabobula clashed into each other like two high-powered missiles and began fighting. Zabobula went straight for the attack throwing an onslaught of strikes at Sonidow who blocked and evaded all of them. Sonidow took the offensive and began flashing his sword at Zabobula who blocked the attacks with his fists that were glowing with his abundant power. “I’ve got to hand it to you,” Zabobula smirked still blocking Sonidow’s attacks, “you’re just as relentless as ever!” Sonidow smirked as well. “But,” Zabobula said catching Sonidow’s long blade with his right hand, “that’s all you will get from me!” The Red Stickman returned fire with a deadly left hand. Sonidow evaded it and removed his sword from the Stickman’s grip. Even as Zabobula missed, the aftershock caused a larger piece of the main building’s roof to collapse. The debris fell on the secondary building’s roof, damaging it heavily. The two titans leapt into the sky and began their clash there. ~
Lord Razen began his duel to the death with Azriel. He charged the Dark Rebellion member with his single-edged sword, the Falchion. Azriel leapt up avoid Razen’s thrust and threw a trio of lethal cards at him. Razen blocked it and dashed towards Azriel’s landing point. But Azriel changed his falling position by maneuvering in the air and landing several feet behind him. “Have you no weapon to fight me in close combat with?” Razen asked. “Spare me the tradition,” Azriel said. “This is war, none of that matters.” “Very well,” Razen said reaching for something where Azriel could not see, “Then I will just have to come at you from long range!” As he ended that sentence he quickly threw something at Azriel. Azriel dodged it but not as fast as the weapon nicked part of his face. Razen smiled still in the position he launched the weapon in. Azriel frowned however. “You will pay for that,” Azriel said. “Then come on,” Razen said provoking him into close combat with a hand gesture, “make me pay.” ~
Sonidow and Zabobula landed back onto the roof which was barely any left to stand on. They stood looking at each other for a moment then they charged at each other again. However they were interrupted as a light came in between them knocking them back. Zabobula shielded his eyes from the light but still looked to see what it was. He, along with Sonidow, was surprised to see the G4Forian Leader standing in between them. “Robo!” Zabobula shouted quickly standing upright. “Get out of my way! This does not concern you.” Sonidow did not say anything to Robo as he stood up. But he stared at him intensely. “I will not allow this fight to continue,” Robo said. “Even if I have to fight you both.” Sonidow pointed his sword at Robo, “You will not interfere. This is between me and him.” Zabobula aimed his palm at Robo as well, “I'm sorry, Robo, but you either will remove yourself or you will die.” End of G4F Chronicles Season 1 Season Two Coming soon...
Escape is a two-syllable word that grants temporary peace in the present to a future victim.
Thanks given by: Handertaker
10-06-2008, 05:08 PM
I gotta melt BP's sword in half! ^^
10-06-2008, 05:20 PM
My brain is melting! FTW!
This stuff makes me speakless! Great work dude! I hope MH will submit it to the LFE "story"-part soon!
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